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What About This

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Re: What About This

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Mar 4th, '10, 06:01

First things first.
Your lines are arhythmical. Keep the lines in 4/4 common time so they can be be followed.
Remember, you're writing music, of which the most important factor of all is rhythm.
Do to others whatever you would like them to do to you. This is the essence of all that is taught in the law and the prophets.
-Matthew 7:12
-Chaos zawladnal światem po raz kolejny-
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