1st Verse Of 'Confession'

[X'ed Up]

As soon as I see her there I start racing there,
Inside her dazing stare, is a gracing glare,
For her I stay-in-here, to start praising her,
If she was mine, I would pay amazing care,
She might simply think we’re just friends,
Time for to express myself, this must end,
Popping a prescription pill, a million spill,
A girl with the wonderful, brilliant skill,
To make all my skin peel, yet I grin still,
Cause an exciting trill, bound to and will,
Happen when we are just riding for real,
That grinding feel, better than finding a kill,
Impossible to leave her amazing presence,
Would be exactly like just wasting essence,
Still not sure if there is some love for me,
Better be cause she’s my drug and ecstasy,

[Fa-Q]

MUL-fucking-TIS...jesus christ...this had perfect structure...i honestly cant wait for the rest of the song...great drop

[X'ed Up]

thank you very much for enjoying it lol

2nd verse coming up! now.....

[X'ed Up]

bump

[classthe_king]

This was dope. Multi's were good, structure and flow were great. I really liked this line:
Impossible to leave her amazing presence,
Would be exactly like just wasting essence
Keep it up

[X'ed Up]

Thanks to everyone

[dR3]

X, you really did a great job. I consider this a masterpiece.

[X'ed Up]

gracias

[dR3]

What happened? Is it finished?

[X'ed Up]

What happened? Is it finished?

2nd Verse is done and Ima post it up in a sec

[dR3]

What happened? Is it finished?

2nd Verse is done and Ima post it up in a sec

24hrs have passed. Still no sign.

[X'ed Up]

What happened? Is it finished?

2nd Verse is done and Ima post it up in a sec

24hrs have passed. Still no sign.

having some probelms at the time

sorry

[dR3]

Liar.

[Solace]

I actually really liked this bro. Keep that shit up. Love these types of pieces myself too, so I of course enjoyed this; and plan on checking the 2nd verse.