Bow To The Beat Remake. Please Feed :(

[classthe_king]

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Sentus- Bow to the Beat

My herculean reign is the pure essence of power
A king in the game leave the peasants devoured
Then your fame reaches from seconds to hours
And soon everything under the heavens is ours
In the presence of cowards hand out a lethal blow
So when you grab the mic all the people know
That in rap there is only one king in one land
And you'll make sure none sing and none stand
I'm done playin, im so ready to take command
I'm sick of the pussies in rap, I'll make a stand
To save the land of all this, I'll shake the hand
Of the devil if it means all who's fake is canned
I'll awake as planned to come and reduce ya plays
When I'm on the beat to rock you like medusa's gaze
You never knew a Mays who had passion for rap
The fame may be annoying but im asking for that

(Chorus)
Fuck praying to the gods I only bow to the beat
It's the music that makes the sound so discreet
When you're in the zone and you pounce then you eat
So beware if you ever fuck around with the beast

My flow's quick witted so you know im sick wit it
I know you fellas see the jealousy so go n' admit it
I'm hot, liquefying when rhythm n rhymes coalesce
Go to rest, in the beat im confident my flow is best
The noblesse, pass me the crown im slashing ya down
I'm vast and profound as I'm surpassin you clowns
You graspin the sound emitted from my vocal chords
Rippin flesh from bone strikin with my vocal swords
My focal force in chambers clashin the heart blades
The beat and I are equal to an atom when we part ways
This art pays off when were conducting this music
When beat meets voice there's no interrupting the fusion
The fucking conclusion is ill put the knife to chest
I'm white n blessed with rhymes that ignite the flesh
I'll surpass everyone in history till only Christ is left
Fuck it, I'll fight the best, it's Sentus with life n death

(Chorus)

Seize the beat and spit it out like a piece of meat
It's a feast to me, on each track I am releasin heat
I'm easily the greatest so don't start with that crap
My thumb's green cause my pen grows art with a pad
Mozart with the rap I'm ready to confide to the beats
It rides through my speech like the tide through a beach
In my eyes you will see its raging through my glands
The music is a part of me and it has made me who I am

(Chorus)

[Fa-Q]

Mul-fuckin-ties...they were great in this...great structure of course and I loved the first verse...really stood out, rest were good but the first really popped

[Slim Zaddy]

hummmm,, damn that was a sick drop actually ,,,,,,, i did'nt like the chorus that much ,, you started sick ,, rhymes and lyrics,, were tight ... but i enjoyed ya 1st verse , more,.. keeeep it up bro ,,, nice job

[classthe_king]

Thanks too all of you. I we-wrote the end of the second verse if you want to check it out cause that's all I do now.