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Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss) Re-Mastered

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Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss) Re-Mastered

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 21st, '10, 23:46

I re-did most of it and I want to see what reception this one gets so yeah feed it :smoking:

Different beat this time thanks to dR.dR3 :y: it's this one: http://www.shadowville.com/1062/genres/gangsta-beats/blood-stains

This lyrical attack is to this mothafuckin' punk pussy,
Who's gonna start learning today when not to push me,
The words I will speak will cause massive head pain,
Let it drain, because fighting me is death in vain,
No matter how many times you clear your throat,
When you sing I think your having a severe stroke,
Your bitch ass will never amount to shit in life,
So just get a knife, and begin to slit and strife,
The hardest song you’ve heard is probably Tik Tok,
Yet you walk around telling girls of your big cock,
That's just as fictional as your purpose to live,
When you fuck with me your carcass you give,

(Chorus/Hook) x2
Always trying to get under my skin,
But this time my tolerance will end,
Now I transfer my anger to this pen,
To devastate you lyrically again,
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Re: Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss) Re-Mastered

Postby dR3 » Mar 22nd, '10, 00:03

Way way better than the first one. And you actually liked the beat? Lol.
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Re: Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss) Re-Mastered

Postby classthe_king » Mar 22nd, '10, 00:05

I wrote a verse to that beat
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss) Re-Mastered

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 22nd, '10, 00:11

@dR.dR3 the beat was dope :worship:.....and thank you :smoking:

@class dope isn't it?
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Re: Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss) Re-Mastered

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 22nd, '10, 14:53

bumping up :y:
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Re: Emotional Devastation(Hunter Diss) Re-Mastered

Postby X'ed Up » Mar 23rd, '10, 22:00

bump again :(
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