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Coleon - Can't Leave Rap Alone

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Re: Coleon - Can't Leave Rap Alone

Postby Fa-Q » Mar 22nd, '10, 06:24

...The game needs me....


I love this concept man, and the multis were crazy intricate but at the same time they are because they're like 3-4-5 syllable phrases...I really liked it and the punchlines were there, Myspace chicks :worship: good drop Co.
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Re: Coleon - Can't Leave Rap Alone

Postby gutawafang » Mar 22nd, '10, 09:52

Fa-Q wrote:...The game needs me....


Man, the beat suits the lyrics man. Nice nameplay and wordplay! :worship:

some humorus stuff I see there. :laughing: :y:
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Re: Coleon - Can't Leave Rap Alone

Postby Spyder » Mar 22nd, '10, 19:25

like a hostage tied to C4, I'm bound to blow up

them Lady GaGa gangsters, cuz they down to tuck a tool


those really stuck out for me, ive seen better from you but not bad for a quick read
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