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16 hands of Satan

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 26th, '10, 15:06

Little brainstormin thing haha like 3 and a half minutes

See I'm stuck to these chords like a cancer patient,
Stuck on this dirt hill where the ants are racin,
Biting at the hands of racist,
Till their hands and face been dried and fried like clams or raisens,
Drinkin up the blood after your family's wasted,
Little African childern askin 'Can we taste it',
Hurry up ya whole family's waitin,
Lickin up the candy coke can we toke that candy tastin,
Yall motherfuckas swop for my style after you copy than we paste it,
I've been waitin my whole life to die, check the time and well today's it,
I can search the whole world to find the tannest racist,
Snip off his fingers and toes all my lingerin foes as I ram his face in,
Bow and arrow is cold and narrow to the head of the man who ran the station,
I'm so quick with the knife, swift when I strike because the hammers blatant,
See I'm writing this way and swipin ya face both with the hand of Satan
Sorry guys but I'm runnin out at 16 like an emancipation
Last edited by Yah-hah on Mar 30th, '10, 15:23, edited 1 time in total.
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: 16 hands of Satan

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 30th, '10, 14:34

Bumpin
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: 16 hands of Satan

Postby Arabian Shady » Mar 30th, '10, 20:45

Quick 16 , was a really good read man, some of the wordplay was really clever and you had consistent flow
good stuff yah
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: 16 hands of Satan

Postby Yah-hah » Mar 31st, '10, 14:19

Arabian Shady wrote:Quick 16 , was a really good read man, some of the wordplay was really clever and you had consistent flow
good stuff yah
Peace


:o :o :o :o :o Where is class or Spyder when you need em :D Thanks homies
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: 16 hands of Satan

Postby Spyder » Mar 31st, '10, 21:39

liked it man

like the sarcastic fuck you drop feel, nice multies throughout with inners all there

nice 16


and that comment... whats that supposed to mean :unsure:
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Re: 16 hands of Satan

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 2nd, '10, 11:10

Spyder wrote:\


and that comment... whats that supposed to mean :unsure:



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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: 16 hands of Satan

Postby Spyder » Apr 2nd, '10, 22:28

i was talkin yah comment lol
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Re: 16 hands of Satan

Postby Yah-hah » Apr 8th, '10, 16:55

Cause yall always sayin yah has no wordplay at all lol just messin with yall. Good looks homies :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

Trimss wrote:Your dog is cute, your tattoo fucking rocks, you can fight and your baby have a big dick.
Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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