Just for you

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This aint bad Stevie, I have a few pointers though.

First, girls are so fucking different because some girls might want something complex and packed with big words and similes and different shit like that. But at the same time a girl might enjoy something simple that compliments simple things about her. It depends on the girl so I can't really properly critique this because of that. But the multis were there so applaud you on that. the only thing that is bad that most girls like is, almost all girls like neatness and structure so try to make the lines match up.....good shit though...oh one more thing, the first line seems weird, I would change big and make it another word describing her smile....good shit though man