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would you ?

Postby hype » Apr 14th, '10, 21:19

i wonder; would you care if i was six feet under
would you care if i never awoke from this slumber
would it matter; if i never saw tomorrow
would you feel hollow; remorse or any sorrow?
would you grieve and visit my stone at the graveyard
would you talk to me in your prayers with a brave heart
or would you carrying on as if i never existed
or maybe you'd go out and find out whoever did this
and get a witness; avenge my death with quickness
together we were perfect but it ended
but no matter what we went through; i never pretended
but what if i were to end this; life forever
would you reminisce our all of our times together
or would you forget me; you see, it just gets to me
i fear that you don't care that you're not next to me
mentally; physically; spiritually or sexually.
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Re: would you ?

Postby Ticalrecords » Apr 17th, '10, 19:34

well ill b damned i thot it b corny but on retrospect its actually quite good. but u gotta change teh last line, ya cant end all tht emotion on "sexually", like come on yk haha. other than tht nice drop man. :y:
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