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Subway Freestyles

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Subway Freestyles

Postby mcZu » Apr 23rd, '10, 20:42

I write a lot in my head when I'm traveling with the subway, I have an instrumental pack on my MP3 player, so I can go all out when I'm bored. I learned to memorize the lines that I create in my head.. This is one of those verses that I ''wrote'' in my head.

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Winning.. is what I’m a pro at, so it seems
I’m leaning back like I’m hooked on promethazine
Just to attack with tact and a left hook, I mean
I bypass with a pass that’s crook like keen
No operation with a bypass that’s book like clean
I operate when I pass by with a rhyme scheme and a vocal burst
That is scheming and screaming to pass your organs to the local church
I pass the performance of your so called verse
How can you perform when I go bomb first?
With a Gohan burst, sick of cell, sicker than a sickle cell sonogram first
Leaving you hollow like a hollow tip tipping through you like a hologram curse
‘cause I’m doper than dope boys and users that try to holler grams first
They try to copy me like the dollar signs on the dollar bills’ monograms
Mano y mano man if you can, de nada
Dog, I’ll put you in a bag like Hilton’s Chihuahua
Uno, dos, tres and then I’ll kill you with a katana
Made of Wolverine, more than mean, I mean a guillotine machine
My arsenal firing like an angry arsonist employer
I’m prior to the fire meaning I pry into cases like Sherlock when I Richard Pryor
With a lock the competition no petition or locksmith
I box with a glove that fits my fist and punch eye sockets
Nah, you can’t stop it..
"Truth is limitless in its range; if you drop a 'T' and look at it in reverse, it could hurt."
- Lupe Fiasco

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Re: Subway Freestyles

Postby Spyder » Apr 23rd, '10, 23:35

saw some recycled...
but sense this was a free then im guessing the battle had the recycled lines

but tight for a free man, wish i could remember what i spit :'(
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