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Pretend

Postby Tash8 » Apr 25th, '10, 22:20

new song that 's coming out soon: here are my lyrics

now pretend what you see in your dreams comes true
pretend your hero and you switch shoes
or pretend you're like me and you try to make it happen
always tryin to flow-trying to be a rapper
pretend that I didn't have to hide that I rapped
cause I never gave a fuck what you thought about that
now imagine-going wild on this stage
with your hometown there with they hands in they air
its kinda what I wish for, tryin to be official
try to be the best at but now i feel less sure
all we do is pretendin and just to what end though
we've had to resort and succumb to this endo
it seems fundamental, like I need to rap
over instrumentals, sieze each track but
if i knew back then-what I learnt now
I know for a fact I'd be, be what? I'd be king somehow

[chorus]
When I'm getting in my zone homies thinkin oh no
cuase they know, what, that I'm gonna go gold
I'ma blow, yup, I won't quit till your sold
never full, cause I'm hungry for the much
eating rappers up at breakfast and lunch
here's a big fuck you for the rest of the bunch
there I said it, what the fuck you want?
yeah what the fuck you want? from me

no one really knows what my purpose is
am I a murderous, sellin purple shit
or am i a lil pussy wont even hurt kid
will you see on the field sporting nike adidas
pumas or reebok
with my whole team thinking no one can defeat us
will I go to college, racin to chaes em slut
so I can bust harder than JaMarcus Russ
or pretend I'm an Oakland Raider, rollin in the paydirt
callin in favor, haters, my aim is extra ordainare its
it's so outrageous, to put it laments
Pretend I'm a bum
offensive and dumb only trying to have a fun
never giving two fucks of anything that you want
if I knew back then what I learnt
I know for a fact, I'd be king somehow
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Re: Pretend

Postby Tash8 » Apr 26th, '10, 02:47

Coleon wrote:Airplanes in the night sky like shooting stars.

Naw but for real pretty good. Besides jackin an idea I liked it, the audio will decide if it's a hit or miss imo. Keep it up bro.


i wrote it to the airplanes beat so you could easily sense the influence, but i believe I flipped the concept....thanks man. it won't be a miss.
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Re: Pretend

Postby Tash8 » Apr 26th, '10, 03:02

Coleon wrote:Well not really a flip when you do what they did :p but anyway I really would go over that beat if I was you. White rappers on a beat Eminem was on is just bad news.


it's a completely diff beat and diff vibe, which is how i flipped it..you'll hear it and then understand.
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Re: Pretend

Postby gutawafang » Apr 26th, '10, 08:54

Nice lyrics man. :y: Not bad a chorus too. :y:
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