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Quick bars

Postby Just Silver » Apr 26th, '10, 02:40

Quick key .... haven't had time at all to practice


I got the credit to back words
i said it dont forget let it set in ya bastards
marijuana pastures set it straight i pass curves
But its all that i am the man that is lonely drugs are the fans
robitussin jam toast weed butter
soaked beef covered in the marinade of others
serenade of colors singing resolution
bringing restitution brain stay clueless
half sweat and half skill
all work stress kills
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Re: Quick bars

Postby Just Silver » Apr 26th, '10, 05:07

Coleon wrote:Damn the multis in the middle were complex as hell, small but good. I like the flow. Keep it up bro. :y:

yo thanks i got to get writing some more
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