When you are Gone

[Nick. Y]

this is from a song of mine and it's dedicated to people who passed away,many have lost someone close, so they know how it feels.. I decided to post the lyrics so here you go

Verse 1:

we wonder… is Life only pain suffer? ‘cause hits come one after another?,
And no matter, how strong I try to stay,
Right now, don’t have the strength to be brave,try but you can’t even change a simple thang,
‘cause Love itself now is barely enough, unfortunately it’s a call from Above,
When you see a tragedy that you take to heart,
You come to realize that life is short,
I guess That’s what makes us so fucking pissed,
I guess fate does it’s own sick twists,
Now I’m so sad, so lost and so cracked,
I live in a mist (can’t see shit), and I prefer smoking crack, but I don’t, I don’t even wish to go back
So at this point should I be calm or stay mad?
Don’t have a difference anymore, I’ll be just like that from the day I snapped...


/chorus/ :to give up now is so, is so wrong, you’ve been with us for so, for so long,just come back home, you should know you’re not alone
I cannot bear the pain, when you’re gone


Verse 2 :

God created us to laugh and cry,
But tears are more than smiles and that ain’t another lie
‘cause one thing’s for sure homie - you live to die,
but how can we overcome such a deep sorrow? life (simply) leaves it’s unfillable hollows
death is like monster, you be the 1, to swallow,
you bout to lose it all,
this shit leaves you callowed,
all you wanna do is kill, scream and rattle,
(shit), right now I prefer grave,than cradle
I need strength,non else but mental,
‘cause every time this shit’s so fuckin fatal,
it’s like and endless story, a nightmare fable,
all I do now is lighting a candle….
My mind is perished,and I perform with windle
Life’s an oil and look I’m there to sizzle
So if you think you run shit
You just another fizzle

/chorus/ :to give up now is so, is so wrong, you’ve been with us for so, for so long,just come back home, you should know you’re not alone
I cannot bear the pain, when you’re gone


Verse 3 :

Walk down the street,
Lookin’ only at my feet,
See all the possies and homies that I greet,
They sense that misery even if I ain’t callin’ em,
cause even now my damn thoughts are post mortem
no mo lookin’ tough, flashy,fresh or solemn,
I’m an angel, but the one that’s fallen
Most precious thing a man has is stolen,
Pain rushes through me, I burn,
It’s like life does a wrong fucking turn,
Not a mic in my hand right now but an urn,
I wonder if future is really written
They think I’m crazy ?
I am ! still I ain’t kiddin’
I remember ,reminisce how things were once,
So please , can I have a moment of silence ?
for my people and yours who passed away,
‘cause
I’m empty, trying to find myself every day…

[Yah-hah]

I like this style, I think I've said that before to you i dont remember. It's like a real simple but very deep level I dig it. I liked the opening bar in the first verse was really smooth. I liked it overall man, stay droppin man wanna see more

[Nick. Y]

thanks man! it's the first time I'm posting something in this section,so I guess you're confusing me with someone else I'm grateful for the feedback ! and I think I could post some more writings in the near future