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Postby Ivy » Feb 11th, '06, 18:38

This is my version of Hush Little Baby...all comments welcome...

Hush little baby don
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Cartman » Feb 11th, '06, 19:11

Yup that pretty cool!
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Postby Speech » Feb 11th, '06, 20:44

cute homie.....homie liky :D
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Postby NEVER ENOUGH » Feb 11th, '06, 21:10

thats cooooool :8) :8) keep the good work
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Postby Ivy » Feb 11th, '06, 22:11

Thanks you guys... :wave:
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Postby MuNxMuN » Feb 11th, '06, 22:29

awwwwwwwww that's so sweet :happy:
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Postby Ivy » Feb 11th, '06, 22:36

Thank you MuNxMuN
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Ivy » Feb 12th, '06, 02:46

Thanks you guys....
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"My life your entertainment, you watch it while I live it. I walk they folla (ay), I talk they holla (ay), just here for your amusement. My life your entertainment. you watch it while I live it. You waitin' for me to lose it, I guess I'm just here for your amusement..." ~ T.I. feat. Usher "My Life Your Entertainment"
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Postby Ivy » Feb 12th, '06, 02:52

I'm not ready for that responsibility....lol... :whistle:
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Postby Ivy » Feb 12th, '06, 03:13

Sure you're potty trained ;) That's what they all say :zipped: And I'd think you'd be embarrassed..I'd send you to school not color cordinated... :laughing:
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Postby ayla » Feb 12th, '06, 03:36

nice read, it's sweet :flower:
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Postby BLAHBLAHBLAH » Feb 12th, '06, 05:39

I Like this better than the original one :worship:
I act like shit don't phase me
inside it drives me crazy
my insecurities could eat me alive!
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Postby Ivy » Feb 12th, '06, 15:02

Thanks for the comments everyone... :wave:
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