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step off my pedistal

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 1st, '10, 14:59

hey what's up guys, it's been awhile and i finally got some decent time to visit the site again. well anyways here's something a wrote not too long ago, btw, i recorded it too but u won't see it for a long time due to me being overseas still with slow connection...


i can't keep sittin low, it's time to get big i know
b/c this is my show without the television tho
i have a mission so i wish to go against em all
but it will be difficult til the end but i'll defend my walls
which has always been my goal, it might turn physical
but i'll hit em with more than my fist or a 50 cal
and i won't let the tempo slow any down, no instead accel
then to my foes i'm standin tall like on my tippy toes
since i can not fall, to raise the temperature i let it flow
don't call it foul, my life isn't basketball
yet not many souls play in bounds
you may then hear sounds that aren't drum rolls
i am the night prowlin owl, well anyhow
don't come around with bull
b/c what does go up must come down
then you'll get swallowed in a black hole
tomorrow's unfound to those clowns, do you follow
while the crown and throne i still hold cuz i got the world in my palms
just allow my story to be told for the crowd
and watch it unfold, every episode
to figure out the results of what i'm really about
you shouldn't have a doubt and second guess yourselves
i got the anecdote to catipult, trust my help
cuz if you don't, below the belt you will choke
and feel the welts at a thousand volts by the pressure dealt
don't ever halt, become incredible
this session surrounds with a message of
a lyrical assault, now step off my pedistal and bounce


----Kaotic----
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Dec 16th, '10, 16:00, edited 3 times in total.
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Re: step off my pedistal

Postby Solace » Jul 1st, '10, 18:18

Yoo what's up man, I didnt read this but I wanted to say welcome back! You're in the army right?
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Re: step off my pedistal

Postby gutawafang » Jul 2nd, '10, 02:33

Sup man. What weapon ya using now? :D How's army life? :wave:

Structure is not good but it don't matter because there's some multis in this. Some nice wordplay and vocabulary. :y:
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Re: step off my pedistal

Postby Ka0t1c » Dec 16th, '10, 16:04

i just realised after all this time that i wrote that verse wrong so i fixed it up to flow correctly :facepalm2 :sweating:
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