tips on my delivery

[dkhp77]

i know this is not english, but i'm trying to find out how my voice should sound.
so just rate me on that if u want.
if i am confident enough in my delivery , i'm considering posting a song on a danish site, so can you give me some tips on what i should change, beacuse it can be tough to see that when it's my own voice

http://www14.zippyshare.com/v/48362431/file.html

[B.A.D.]

hey man, this is not the place for this threads, there's a whole entire section for this. sorry I'm gonna have to lock your thread. but post it again on those forums. Audio Stage, A.S. Lounge, etc...

just make sure you real the rules of those sections