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I need help with my writing

Postby Ubb » May 18th, '13, 19:53

Whenever I write a verse, or just a couple of bars I go "wow, this shit is so good, looks like Eminem or Big L wrote this", but after like 10 minutes I realize it's SHIT. The multis sounds forced and my punchlines are shit, I've been writing for only 2 years though.

Any tips so I can increase my writing ability? I know the majority of you guys are really good at writing. I need some advice.
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Re: I need help with my writing

Postby Slim Fiasco » May 18th, '13, 20:03

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Re: I need help with my writing

Postby PAINKILLƎR » May 18th, '13, 20:04

Yeah it's hard to give pointers when I can't see where you're struggling at. Post something on CW.
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Re: I need help with my writing

Postby Just Silver » May 18th, '13, 20:15

Have u posted cw before here
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