Trimss wrote:Atone The Underdog wrote:What you guys don't seem to understand is this, i am making music for me, not you, my music is a form a therapudic release for me, tp help ME get thru shit i deal with
and it just so happens that while i'm having fun with it, you guys may not like it, but there are people on twitter who retweet my shit, who ask for my links, i don't tell them to go to my links, they ask for them, and they continue to listen, and so far this month i'v gotten over 4,300 plays on my soundclick, obviously, that says something right there.
Ok, so you guys don't like it, cool, but i must be doing something right to be getting the positive feedback that i'm getting from everybody else, sure, King Gordy said my stuff was awful, but he also told me to keep goin, not that his opinion matters cuz last time i checked ppl were throwin rocks at booin him off stage at the gathering, so he don't have much room to talk.
and as i said, i'm not making this music for you, or King Gordy, i am making this music for me, and the people that actually do enjoy it, i wouldn't care if only 2 people liked my music, thats 2 more ppl than i aimed for, so you guys can make your silly post's and cracks about how awful i am, you can continue to mention me in your threads to take your lame shots at me about how much i suck, but you are wasting your time, because if i wasn doing this music for you, i would go out and spend $100 on a mic, and get a real studio and put out real music for Sale, instead, i give it all away for free, why? cuz i'm not doing this shit for money, i am doing it as a fix, cuz if i did not record music i wouldn't have a way to release, and i'd probab;y end up in the news for murder.
Dude, you know I never hate on you just for the sake of it but after that big ass post I came to a conclusion. Here it is:
- You're still off beat.
And I know it's because you don't really understand how to be on beat or what that does even mean, and I feel like you i'm still struggling to flow right. But having people supporting you doesn't really mean you're good, or do something right.
I mean being ON BEAT is the more IMPORTANT step in a rap song. Look at Bizarre, his rhymes are mainly shit but he still manages to stay on the beat and tries to flow. No multies, but he still does it. What does that mean ? That means you have to do it. Not rap like you're reading, or if you have a shitty ass mic, and not spit too close of the mic.
Hit the snare with the end of line rhyme and that'd be a cool step. I'm actually trying to do it too.
If people here hate on you it's not because they hate you, it just pisses them off that everytime you post a song here you never take advices, you never post back in the thread like Ax-D said. Change that mentality, try to listen to what we say and you'll be really better.
When you do really bad tracks, they give you a lot of criticism. Then when all the criticism helped you to improve, they'll give you a more "in deep" one. Like "Sometimes it seems like your chasing the snare, and you're too fast" is better than "there's no flow at all"
Now keep that in mind. Maybe you got 4000 views a month but if you actually listen to what we say you'll get more than that.
READ THIS MOFO !
Read it all
i'll watch some tutorials when i get time, i been busy lookin for a better job before i get killed cuz of the one i have, which is a high chance cuz i'm basically paid to be security for the asshole customers who come in the store, i've already had a knife pulled on me and if it wasn't for a cop pulling in one day a robbery would have taken place, but dude seen the cop, and didn't try anything.
But yeah, i'll sit and watch some tutorials, from what i read, some of you on here actually do want me to get better, and i thank you guys for that.
And Demaz, i'll look you up but i won't be online tonight cuz my ex called me like 20 minutes ago asking if i want to hang and smoke after i get off work,