Macdaddy, Sla, or C.R.E.A.M? Who will it be?
My vote is dead prez.


I'm Lyrically-Lame, I was bragging at the but i'm epically below Okay
I keep writing songs but i keep Erasing , i'm a Human-body Waste
People always know what i'm Backing , same lyrics said Everyday
Even if a write a love song , people'll say that it's really terribly gay
I tried rap battling but they killed me like i'm against a military base
I even felt the pain , i got dissed so hard and i didn't do great
I didn't have a single rhyme in my head to spit it away
I said i'll be improving with time but was a lie
(..)About 10 years passed by and i'm still tragically lame-to-same
They told me keep going but i'm sick of this game
i'll pack my fucking bags and go if i went through another fucking fail
Bitches scream when they see me but not in a good way
They said that i'm insane and they wish to never see me again
(..) If they said listen then it's Okay , but see me again ?
That was a bit harsh cause i'm handsome , even though i'm a little bit grey
I'm the doormat to the door of rapping , loser rappers made me a prey
Everybody want to battle me cause i lose everytime so-
perhaps i should cut my brain off and sell it free on eBay


C.R.E.A.M wrote:Great to know you are a fan of my stuff




Listen bitch this is some, sickening shit to git ya,
Pissing up ya kitchens and dippin'...in a, stinkin' river,
Little bit sinister, stick my fist up ya sissy sister's,
Fricking cliteris then slit her wrist with sixty clippers,
Git the scissors, pick the skin from them and I'll make arts and crafts,
Grab the flesh and give it kisses, dim the lights, it’s dark and black,
Stabbing breasts and hitting bitches with the biggest, sharpest axe,
Packing heads, I knit their stitches, where the fuck’s the carcass at?,
Walking around, lost in the town, I stare at a barely open door,
Black hoody in place, it’s just about to get very deadly, hopeless, raw,
Wield my steady rope and saw, I’m spinning, already doped and lost,
i take some steps and go across; suddenly I’m treading over bras,
My vision clears and I slowly spot, coke, pot and a sweaty smoked up broad,
I flick the lights off and whoa it’s dark, all she says is oh my god,
I’m hyped and happy but you fight and scratch me, girl let me hold ya claws,
I'ma tie you up and dismember you from... hat to head to toe to sock,
(Chorus)
Now, where to begin, fuck it, I'll shave ya hair at the end, loving,
How, you swear at me when, rubbing, your ass bare in the skin, what bitch?,
Goddamn! who's at the door, I'm about to enduce in a war and shoot up a storm,
Shut up!, your cheek looks fine I was only using a fork, now suit up you whore,
Your vains, I'm licking them, they glistening just like a crimson diamond,
Brain is rippin in' and shivering cause baby when you cryin',
I break to smitherings, I'm sick within, I simply git to dyin',
But, when you scream, my sins are clean, I'm in a dream, my wings are flyin'
I'm foul, I'm mentally unstable, I'm psychologically a mess,
And while you think this is a fable, come try and bother me and rest,
In pieces, I'm a beast, c'mon release some laughter, this is funny ain't it?,
I'm buzzed and wasted, I leave you alone for a minute and something's baking?,
Your skin feels like rugged paper, where you recieve these cuts and scrapes from,
Smells like smoke, is hell that close?, heat waves pushing like shoves by Satan,
Your arm is chewed, torn and red, like you got bombed by two hordes of jets,
Why harm your smooth, gorgeous flesh? Ha! you haven't gone thru cruel torture yet



Master Chief wrote:You're almost as bad as a member as macdaddy and Sla. You're a waste of space. You know SHIT about Hip Hop, you troll terribly, you spam like a retard, you're a horrendous writer and type like a 5 year old with down-syndrome.

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MikeNUFC wrote:The Master Chief/2sday/X'ed Up/ChronicJon/MakaveliTheDon conspiracy still makes a lot of sense to me.
It would make sense in terms of intellegence as well - the guy is maturing
Alias':
2sday = Complete idiot
X'ed Up = Quite stupid
ChronicJon = Slightly dumb
MakaveliTheDon = Not that stupid
Master Cheif = Relatively intellegent

C.R.E.A.M wrote:Okay let's see , How many years/months was you writing ? i only begun from 1 month , so basically comparing isn't fair and i admit that you're a better writer than me , but i'm pretty sure i AM a better writer than you been when you were on my age , Guess what ? i'm 15 , did you know shit about writing when you were 15 ? i don't think so
I know more Hip Hop than you will ever know , F.A.N.S is one of Tech N9ne's best hooks ? lmfao , i troll better than you will ever will .. all what you have is that "Ballin' Uncontrollably" and you got trolled by every member you crossed paths with (Xray, dead prez, claathe_king .. etc)
I spam , at least i have the guts , go listen to some F.A.N.S and cry , faggot


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