Menzo dropped an audio song.
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by TonyTilt » Jan 12th, '12, 08:17
Sounds good, timing could have been better but Menzo seems to know what he's doing and seems to love doing it. Keep it up!
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by TonyTilt » Jan 12th, '12, 08:23
And it'll only get better and more refined with time and experience, proud of him for getting his shit out there and taking all criticism on a positive note no matter how arrogant it is.
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by AbramIsaac » Jan 12th, '12, 08:31
He needs to work on his delivery.
His lyrics are nice, but his delivery is a bit too flat. He just needs to inject more emotion into his voice. That's just something that comes with getting more comfortable behind a microphone.
Subpar lyrics can be passable with the right delivery. Outstanding lyrics aren't as believable if the emotion isn't there. No need to get discouraged though, he's got timing and lyricism down well enough, only leaving delivery with emotion in need of improvement.
Nice lyrics, good concept, and he's on beat. It's not a bad track, but it could be great with a more passionate delivery.
His lyrics are nice, but his delivery is a bit too flat. He just needs to inject more emotion into his voice. That's just something that comes with getting more comfortable behind a microphone.
Subpar lyrics can be passable with the right delivery. Outstanding lyrics aren't as believable if the emotion isn't there. No need to get discouraged though, he's got timing and lyricism down well enough, only leaving delivery with emotion in need of improvement.
Nice lyrics, good concept, and he's on beat. It's not a bad track, but it could be great with a more passionate delivery.
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by AbramIsaac » Jan 12th, '12, 08:36
Eh, I'm all about positive reinforcement.
I'm saying that it would be an alright track with a believable delivery.
As it is though? Shit seems harsh, but I don't think people would listen to it more than once.
I'm saying that it would be an alright track with a believable delivery.
As it is though? Shit seems harsh, but I don't think people would listen to it more than once.
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by TonyTilt » Jan 12th, '12, 08:39
I was just being positive because he was very helpful and gave me advice on some of my shit..I can't hate on the dude
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by TonyTilt » Jan 12th, '12, 08:44
Good luck to both of you. 
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by TonyTilt » Jan 12th, '12, 08:52
I love this goddamn forum. 
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by mdemaz » Jan 12th, '12, 12:28
Not bad for a first time...
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by Atone » Jan 12th, '12, 12:33
Shouldn't this be in the comedy section?
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by mdemaz » Jan 12th, '12, 12:41
I just got the joke, my bad, derp.
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by mdemaz » Jan 12th, '12, 16:49
Wow.....Holy fuck...
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by TonyTilt » Jan 12th, '12, 17:15
mdemaz wrote:
Wow.....Holy fuck...
Like I said, good luck to both of you..
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by TonyTilt » Jan 12th, '12, 17:30
Nah haha I'm not going to judge and get in the middle of this, I have no audio to show for myself therefore I have no right.
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Re: Menzo dropped an audio song.
by Trimss » Jan 12th, '12, 22:37
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