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[Atone]

To be honest, my "retirement" thread was retarded as fuck, and i'm done with the bullshit

that jokingly ego i had where i was acting better than the world, that was stupid, i get in these moods and decide to just talk shit, am i retiring? hell no, you have to be something to actually retire from something, i know i'm not as good as i claim to be, i don't know why i acted as if i was, i know i have ton's of work for me to step up with the music.

J.R, that shot in your rap you took at me, weak bro, i never said shit about you in any of my shit for you to be suddenly taking shots, but thats whatever, do what floats your boat if you feel like writing a line about me in your rap, when on twitter you was feedin me your lines asking for my opinion months ago, i won't deny that you are good at writing, but why the hell would you suddenly take a random ass shot at me? i aint mad, just confused cuz i made a point to never go at you, never say shit about you, til you went at me, you was cool, but that weak shot was stupid and that rap was actually good, but the line about me was out of place and could have been left out.

to the rest of you, i am listening to your feedback, i know i'm not all that great and really, i wish i could step up but to be honest, as i have said before, i'm not making music to be serious or make it to a record label, i'm making music for me, and friends who like it, the rapping on beat thing, i need a tutorial to really understand that, i'm trying, but also, i'm having fun making the music, thank you for the feedback you all have given me tho, i do appreciate that.

[B.A.D.]

well thats a very mature attitude from you and I applaud that, don't let emotions to get you in the wrong way, let them guide you to improve your creativity.

hopefully you can be more relaxed now and patiently take all the feedback and slowly try to improve, if you have the passion go for it, cuz in the end, it doesn't matter if you do music for your friends, or for the public or only for you; you have to do it right. you know?

keep practising man, everybody starts the same.

[Atone]

well thats a very mature attitude from you and I applaud that, don't let emotions to get you in the wrong way, let them guide you to improve your creativity.

hopefully you can be more relaxed now and patiently take all the feedback and slowly try to improve, if you have the passion go for it, cuz in the end, it doesn't matter if you do music for your friends, or for the public or only for you; you have to do it right. you know?

keep practising man, everybody starts the same.

Y'all don't gotta worry tho, if i do make music i just won't post it here

[Fleka]

Isn`t this like, the second thread where you say "I`m sorry for being an idiot"? Get your shit together, man.

[Kill You]

I'm like the others, I applaud your maturity in this thread.

[J.R.]

The shot was basically filler; no actual opinions or feelings meant with it. Just kinda..you know; it was a random verse. You helped me with a lot of my writing, so I can't actually diss you.

And thanks for the compliment on it being good.

Also, really impressed by this thread...glad you've learned, man.

[CrashBand]

[DƎRDYPK]

not everybody can read

[Solace]

keep practising man, everybody starts the same.

Yes but Atone isn't just starting, he's had more rap experience than a lot of members on this site lol.

That being said, I do hope you take feedback serious. Because it hardly shows, so I feel like "Why should I say the SAME EXACT THING to Atone every time he drops something new?" and that aggravates me. I mean if you're making music for yourself, why wouldn't you want to better it for yourself? I'm not gonna buy a guitar and only play alone in my room the same horrid thing for a couple years and be content with myself. Personal progression Atone.

[Atone]

keep practising man, everybody starts the same.

Yes but Atone isn't just starting, he's had more rap experience than a lot of members on this site lol.

That being said, I do hope you take feedback serious. Because it hardly shows, so I feel like "Why should I say the SAME EXACT THING to Atone every time he drops something new?" and that aggravates me. I mean if you're making music for yourself, why wouldn't you want to better it for yourself? I'm not gonna buy a guitar and only play alone in my room the same horrid thing for a couple years and be content with myself. Personal progression Atone.

Bolded part is where you are wrong, i only started recording music in December of 2010, i posted my very 1st mixtape on here in January of 2011, i've been writing for 10 years, i don't have that much recording experiance.

but i'm not trying to make excuses here, i do want to get better, i do feel that when it comes to writing, i can really write alot of dope shit, most, if not all of my songs have been written within 10 minutes, some songs took longer, but i feel like i am definitly expressing how i feel when i write, i just wish i could put every single emotion in those songs when i record, cuz i know if these songs were done right, they would leave a powerful message.

Fleka, i probably have made a thread like this before, but here's the hard part, you probably don't deal with being Bi-Polar, so i cannot explain to you exactly how it works, but it's very hard to deal with, cuz when that olther side of me comes out, i will do, and say shit that i later wish i never did, or, as you guys have seen, i will post random, weird shit, in an attempt to be funny just to make myself feel better cuz it helps me deal with my anger or whatever feeling i'm having at the moment.

J.R, no harm done, your a good dude, and i respect you, all is good man

[CrashBand]

Bolded part is where you are wrong, i only started recording music in December of 2010, i posted my very 1st mixtape on here in January of 2011, i've been writing for 10 years, i don't have that much recording experiance.

but i'm not trying to make excuses here, i do want to get better, i do feel that when it comes to writing, i can really write alot of dope shit, most, if not all of my songs have been written within 10 minutes, some songs took longer, but i feel like i am definitly expressing how i feel when i write, i just wish i could put every single emotion in those songs when i record, cuz i know if these songs were done right, they would leave a powerful message.

Fleka, i probably have made a thread like this before, but here's the hard part, you probably don't deal with being Bi-Polar, so i cannot explain to you exactly how it works, but it's very hard to deal with, cuz when that olther side of me comes out, i will do, and say shit that i later wish i never did, or, as you guys have seen, i will post random, weird shit, in an attempt to be funny just to make myself feel better cuz it helps me deal with my anger or whatever feeling i'm having at the moment.

J.R, no harm done, your a good dude, and i respect you, all is good man

[Chet Starr]

^^^^ I ain't being a dick to you atone, but that image made me laugh like hell

[Atone]

lol confusing i know, i guess i was making excuses but i don't want to, idk,

[EyeQ200]

When people was giving you genuine feedback you ignored them or got angry at them, then you make a thread knowing that people were just going to take the piss out of you but went ahead with it anyway. Maybe it will give you a little kick with that many people taking shots at you in a thread, but habits don't change that easy.

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[Solace]

Bolded part is where you are wrong, i only started recording music in December of 2010, i posted my very 1st mixtape on here in January of 2011, i've been writing for 10 years, i don't have that much recording experiance.

Well you've been writing for 10 years, but in that entire time you didn't even try to write on the beat. Apart of writing is flowing as much as it is apart of actual recording. Still more experience than anyone has in writing on this entire site so you should be a legend or something, so that excuse doesn't really work.

I suggest you record and send it to an audio VET and if they approve and think it's a good improvement from you to post it up. Unless you actually stick to your word of not posting them on TR anymore (which I doubt).

Lol CrashBand