Devil'sAdvocate wrote:Take a moment and look at this verse:
*yawns* Forget a chorus -- my metaphors are so complicated
it takes six minutes to get applause (yay)
And by the time you all catch on, I'ma end your career
and walk away with the whole floor so you have nothin to fall back on!
I'll throw you off of ten floors .. *AHHHHHHH*
Pull a fuckin headache outta my head, and put it in yours (take this)
I'm indoors, waitin for this acid to seep in my skin pores
to go outdoors and do some in-stores
This bitch wanted to blow me, I said, "It oughta happen.
You swallow cum bitch?" "No, but I brought a napkin"
Gettin skullie while I'm autographin
Got my daughter laughin cause I sent her mother whitewater raftin
I'm not a fact, I'ma proven fear
Mr. Rogers blocked up my U-haul screamin,
"Wait, wait, wait.. you ain't movin here!"
Lorena Bobbitt, c'mere, want a souveneir?
I've been high as fuck, since I was a juvi-neer
Juvenile? Same difference -- I need some 'caine
cause I ain't sniffed since I woke up the seven slain infants
(Oh my God!) Brain implants and they say there's a slim chance
I won't stay the same cause I traded brains with a chimpanz'
People are saying that i now show Eminem lots of hate and critique him so much,its his fucking fault i do this,he was god at a point,its like growing up eating toasts and caviar drinking champagne,and a couple years later forcing yourself to settle with greasy burgers and orange soda,i will simply refuse that my favorite rapper,for his own sake in 2010-2011 is rapping at this pretty low level to what he once was.
People blame the vocals,how he sometimes acquires this screamy shallow delivery because he got brainwashed after he dropped Relapse,the dumb ass (i never thought id call such a genius this) now thinks "if i scream,then i go in hard,yo!",his vocals are treated awkwardly nowadays.
What is wrong with his structure and flow?
why do his rhymes and words seem so scrambled nowadays,he just chooses to place his words this messed up on the beats he raps on? the flow,he used to do this very hard to perfect "simple singy song flow" or just the flow where dumb asses think he is "talking over the beat",these 2 types of flow are something nobody in hip hop can perfect,the guy went from becoming the beat and smoothly riding it to having it overhaul him and beat him down,he sounds like hes struggling while rapping,he lost every sense of tempo and rhythm,nothing sounds interesting,his flow used too seem so confident and relaxed,controled and perfectly paced,what the fuck happened Marshall?
Whats with the punchlines?
First of all,off the bat,punchlines are the easiest skill in hip hop,its mostly unimpressive to me,doing punchlines gets you nowhere,i will not be impressed be cheap wordplay and puns that are this awkwardly delivered,he lost his sense of wit and tact,when he did a punchline back in the day,he made you feel it was a part of what he was actually saying,not nowadays,now its like he thinks "ooops 3 bars in,time for pun,yo!"
Whats with the content Marshall?
i have had enough of this "im back,im happy and positive" shit,he ran that the fuck down on Recovery,whats with this random content hes coming up with,i can think of like 300 concepts right now,be more metaphorical with your content if you think you ran out of shit to talk about,nothing wrong in exploring,thats why Relapse feels so fresh to me,address life,money,greed,think of hip hop as trapped and u trying to save it,talk to your fans,talk to your daughters,lead the generation that believes in you too much it got you to be this average.
Is Eminem starting to lose confidence?
Well,so it seems,hes sounding like a broken record nowadays,hes like this mutant that answers the same questions the same way,he had charisma nobody ever had,now hes just this quiet fuck,he does not sound comfortable while rapping,back in his prime he sounded like he is having fun,stop letting people influence you,rap more with D12,because they have this sense of sounding comfortable that you now lost,let joe budden teach you something,royce is now too rich to sound like the legit great rapper he once was.
I simply refuse to be blind.
now was all that said,Em will always be the GOAT for the sole fact that he dropped 4 classic albums nobody is ever coming close too.
What Em should do imo is sit down and analyze the lyrics of the old songs. He should also start making beats himself again.
