unmissingpiece wrote:I don't like the first part of 2nd verse. It sort of ruins the song for me.
"Think you can hurt people and just keep getting away WITHHH-- ITT?
...You expect me to just get over him? Pretend he never EXISSS--TEDD?"
And the line "Like I reach my full potential–- I peeked."
Still a good record, though. That fourth verse
I like the word dissections. It's never really been done before, so it can't be called lazy. Those words fit the story so well, it would be tough to tell the story with the rhyme patterns he was using.