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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby Francesco » Oct 29th, '13, 01:39

Yeah those were by far easier to pick rather than the Rap God ones...
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Re: thw monster - lyrics

Postby emusic » Oct 29th, '13, 01:40

Hage wrote:I could've written this.

lol, no.
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby Kill You » Oct 29th, '13, 01:41

Lyrics are good, I like 'em.
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby Amadeo » Oct 29th, '13, 01:45

"I'm getting so big I need a shrink" was pretty good...the rest is just forgettable.

He seems so eager to let us all know that he has OCD and he spends all his time thinking of rhymes. While it's true, it's clearly not translating in the music. His flow is sloppy and his rhymes are forced.
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby TotalEminemFanboy » Oct 29th, '13, 01:54

The lyrics are honestly not all that impressive, especially when compared to like... well... a lot of his past songs.

I like the sound of Rihanna's chorus but I honestly listen to Eminem for good RAP music, not pop. Hopefully the mainstream will like it so it will have actually been worth it for Em to make it.

I like the song it's just that Eminem's part is obviously pretty weak, especially compared to what he could be doing. I don't get why it's so weak and choppy...
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Re: thw monster - lyrics

Postby Elision » Oct 29th, '13, 02:21

Hage wrote:
emusic wrote:
Hage wrote:I could've written this.

lol, no.

Yes, don't act like its fucking lyrically amazing or has a special fucking flow or real emotion behind the delivery because it doesn't.
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i'm comin in, drivin my short bus
with this nose i don't need a torch up
bustin through, light the industry's porsche up
comin after who didn't support us...
imma change your brain bring
every wicked bit of strange to mainstream
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby dR3 » Oct 29th, '13, 02:28

Doesn't he say "loosely abused ink"?
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Re: thw monster - lyrics

Postby DetroitSkills » Oct 29th, '13, 02:29

Hage wrote:I could've written this.

i could be morgan freeman.
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby UofLCard » Oct 29th, '13, 02:32

I wish his verses were longer.

I also hear 'loose leaf'.
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby Sofi1993 » Oct 29th, '13, 03:56

UofLCard wrote:I wish his verses were longer.


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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby Nostradomus » Oct 29th, '13, 04:02

TotalEminemFanboy wrote:The lyrics are honestly not all that impressive, especially when compared to like... well... a lot of his past songs.

I like the sound of Rihanna's chorus but I honestly listen to Eminem for good RAP music, not pop. Hopefully the mainstream will like it so it will have actually been worth it for Em to make it.

I like the song it's just that Eminem's part is obviously pretty weak, especially compared to what he could be doing. I don't get why it's so weak and choppy...

Not really, that third verse is incredible with the multi's. I'm talking rhyming at least 6 syllables at a time, check it out
I'll stop the alphabet at S and got it down to a T

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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby EminemBase » Oct 29th, '13, 05:17

The song is still a big fucking shame, and I'm gutted.

But his rapping in it is deceptively simple / sounds a lot more dismissable than it is.

That flow and his writing is pretty layered, the more you listen, the more it unravels; not saying the thoughts are complex, but the craft of the rapping... I don't agree with the 'choppy' sentiments either... that's called timing and pausing, and I prefer that neat snappiness to his recent flows.

But that fucking hook and beat again - so generic. And the theme... MMLP2?... sigh.
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby Whitefox » Oct 29th, '13, 05:20

I can see how EmBase shouts:

WELL THATS NOT FAIR
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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby kingelvis » Oct 29th, '13, 05:38

Whitefox wrote:I can see how EmBase shouts:

WELL THATS NOT FAIR


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Re: the monster - lyrics

Postby Kmahrle83 » Oct 29th, '13, 12:15

Horsebot3K wrote:The verses are simple compared to Rap God, but sometimes simple is good. That third verse :worship:

The hook lyrics are one of my favorite parts of the song. I'mma have to look up this Bebe Rexha and check out some of her music.


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