Drop The World (Remix) Alex Rambo ft. Matty Mitch

[AlexRambo]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=giJnlURbkj0

That was my first official track. Many more on my Myspace! Feedback is greatly appreciated! Thanks!

-Alex Rambo

[AlexRambo]

Anybody care to leave me some constructive criticism?

[classthe_king]

Feed other people first

[AlexRambo]

Sure thing man!

[Solace]

The main problem with this track was your delivery. Sounded like you were just holding back with your voice. Along with that your flow was choppy. Keep it smooth and going. Your lyrics are fine though maybe in the future incorporate more multi-syllable rhymes. The chorus is pretty funny...drop her on my fucking bed haa. He got a good voice, this Matty Mitch. His delivery was pretty good compared with you but his flow was also choppy. Keep at it you two, the people on this site will give you a lot of helpful tips

[AlexRambo]

Thanks man, appreciate the feedback!

[Mr. Chambers]

flow was pretty bad.....syllables stretched all over the place....delivery was very.....boring......lyrics were simple.......content was ok......
gotta be honest..this wasn't a good song..you really gotta work on your flow and delivery...

[AlexRambo]

Well at least ya'll are being dead honest, its much appreciated.

[Banks]

god damn

[Just Silver]

i had a feeling the audio messed it up and the lyrics themselves were alright

seems to happen a lot

[Terry_M]

Not bad by any means, I think the delivery and flow could have been better though. You definitely have talent.

[AlexRambo]

Not bad by any means, I think the delivery and flow could have been better though. You definitely have talent.

Thanks brother, much appreciated!