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Through The Pain - Slice

Postby Slice » Feb 14th, '10, 15:57

a new emotional track by me. i hope u like it :happy:

http://www.myspace.com/slizzle88

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Re: Through The Pain - Slice

Postby Slice » Feb 16th, '10, 15:27

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Re: Through The Pain - Slice

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 16th, '10, 15:44

Yo, I tried to check it out, but my browser (PS3) won't let me use the MySpace player.
If it was on z share or something then I could feed it.
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Re: Through The Pain - Slice

Postby Slice » Feb 16th, '10, 15:52

ok i uploaded it on z share. http://www.zshare.net/audio/726369965686c813/
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Re: Through The Pain - Slice

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » Feb 16th, '10, 16:06

I'm more than average like sex with who?

This beat is great.
Good lyrics.
"we don't know each other/ but I'm your ghetto tear"
Chorus is repetitive, but I guess that's the point.
Pretty decent track.
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Re: Through The Pain - Slice

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 16th, '10, 19:25

beat really grows on me...with the time it gets better
delivery was below average on the verse..but good on the hook again..
also work on clarity...you dont pronounce certain words properly...
flow is okay but could sound more smooth,more fluent if you know what i mean
liked the hook..its catchy... :y:
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Re: Through The Pain - Slice

Postby Slice » Feb 17th, '10, 00:02

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:I'm more than average like sex with who?

This beat is great.
Good lyrics.
"we don't know each other/ but I'm your ghetto tear"
Chorus is repetitive, but I guess that's the point.
Pretty decent track.


like sex with several bitches :happy:
thanks for your feedback :worship:

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:beat really grows on me...with the time it gets better
delivery was below average on the verse..but good on the hook again..
also work on clarity...you dont pronounce certain words properly...
flow is okay but could sound more smooth,more fluent if you know what i mean
liked the hook..its catchy... :y:


thanks for feedback :worship: I'll work on it
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