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Re: Change The World

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 18th, '10, 03:56

chorus was fucking awesome....tbh it was the highlight of the track

beat is ok...not really my type of beat...too "southern" sounding

1st verse...pretty good verse....good flow...good delivery and good content..

2nd verse....not as good as the 1st verse....was only average.....the flow was kinda meh.......content was good

overall i really like this shit...prolly make it onto my zune...(y)....

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Re: Change The World

Postby Kosovic » Feb 18th, '10, 22:27

Didnt really feel it. Yeah it was kinda aight, you did some work on it, but your whole subject in it just ruins the mood. Plus its not my kind of song anyways. Try to avoid this kind of topics, speak about more "things around you". I'd give it a 3 out of 10, just because you attempted.
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Re: Change The World

Postby DelinQuent » Feb 18th, '10, 23:01

chambers, thanks for the feed my dude. anytime you're ready i'm down to do a track.

kosovic.... this is "something around me". I'm not gonna do certain types of songs just cause certain people aren't feeling my subject matter. I can only do what i feel like doing. thanks for checking though.
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Re: Change The World

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 19th, '10, 11:54

the overlays are really well mixed...delivery is kool
love the beat....flow is allrightnot amazing but does the job.... :y:
mixing is a big step up from your previous stuff :y: :y:
lyrics are real i can tell...so u get another thumb up :y:
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Re: Change The World

Postby DelinQuent » Feb 19th, '10, 23:39

thanks for taking time out to listen chris, i appreciate it
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Re: Change The World

Postby Robbie G » Feb 20th, '10, 16:42

It wasn't my type of song but I can appreciate it for what it is. :y:

Chorus was the best part imo.
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Re: Change The World

Postby Tornado » Feb 20th, '10, 17:44

Beat ain't my thing even thought i see whyh'd you choose choose it for this type of track. I dunno, the whole track just passed me by, nothing really stood out for me. There's no major problem with it just not that great to bump to tho i could see alot of people liking it and my taste is really raw anyway. i'd give it a 5 outta 10
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Re: Change The World

Postby DelinQuent » Feb 20th, '10, 19:35

good looks on the feed.

I think this song is basically hit or miss with people.

Thanks again for everyone who took the time out to listen and give feed.
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