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Long time, no see...

Postby Jay-19 » Feb 24th, '10, 00:04

Been away from the Audio Stage along time now, and I've been planning on drop ya'll a track as soon as I had a new one made.
And as I finished one just tonight, here it is for ya'll! :smoking: :b:

Jay-19 - See You Next Time.mp3 - 4.4 Mb
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 24th, '10, 00:08

omg a new flow :o
ur voice sounds a bit rusty...i can tell you didnt touch the mic in a while
but you got the techniques on lock...everything is good
also the mixing is nice..delivery is pretty nice too... :y:
kool track.. :y:
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby AbramIsaac » Feb 24th, '10, 00:26

Nice.

There were only a couple of times where I noticed your delivery was off because you stretched a word to fit the beat.

However, your delivery was nice, hardcore type of sound, even though it wasn't heated. Lyrics were tight, and the mixing was good too.

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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Requiem » Feb 24th, '10, 02:45

the beat's really nice...

i love the flow on this, ur lyrics are nice. i like the feel of this track, nice adlibs.

overall, i think this is a pretty decent track. i didn't notice any word stretching, it all worked for the flow. :y:

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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Jay-19 » Feb 24th, '10, 13:01

Thanks for checkin' out guys!

Appreciate it! :b: :smoking:
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Slice » Feb 24th, '10, 15:18

nice lyrics..
your delivery and flow was nice too..
pretty good track :y:
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Jay-19 » Feb 24th, '10, 15:25

Thanks Slice! :b:
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 25th, '10, 15:12

nice,, track man i love it ,, liked ya hook ,, and ya verses.. are cool . glad to hear u back ,.. bro ,, nice , shit,, keep em ,, comming ,, 9/10 . :y:
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Jay-19 » Feb 25th, '10, 17:50

Thanks Zaddy!

I appreciate you checkin' it out man, good lookin' out! :b: :b:
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Mr. Chambers » Feb 25th, '10, 18:54

pretty good song...me and boston was talking about collabing on this beat.....

chorus was cool....quality was good....nice delivery....lyrics were cool....flow....it was overall solid...but there were a few spots where you'd end too early or u tried rushing through syllables to finish....but nothing that damaged the song..so it was all good..... :y:
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Re: Long time, no see...

Postby Jay-19 » Feb 25th, '10, 19:06

Thanks for the feedback Chambers! Appreciate it! :b:
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