Danny Thomas - Banned From TV (NEW SINGLE from my mixtape)

[TheOfficialThomas]

more like meaning I phrased myself wrong.

[Medicine Ball]

meaning about 200 ppl wonna buy it that I know of.

[Mr. Chambers]

yeah cause its totally possible to change my name. its a lil wayne beat by the way so I stuck to the same name, yup.

*cough*...


ok...your lyrics....were below average...flow was shakey....quality sucked....your voice...your voice is mad young......you gotta find a way to make that sound more appealing......tbh...if 200 ppl are buying your shit...i'm willing to bet they doing it to be nice....i'm just being honest...this wasn't good....everything needs stepped up....

[TheOfficialThomas]

Yeah im only 17 bro, been rapping for 8 months, been writting for a year. so its off to the right track.

[Mr. Chambers]

Yeah im only 17 bro, been rapping for 8 months, been writting for a year. so its off to the right track.

^no i ment it's higher pitched......but i'm hoping you already underwent puberty.....you just gotta find a way to make it sound appealing......

[youngfire420]

I actually liked this shit man, didnt read most of the other comments. It seemed like hate. But i liked it. Its actually not a Lil Wayne beat though, he just went over it on No Ceilings. But nonetheless, props.

[Tash8]

wasnt bad, but ur delivery could use work... u were very emotionless with the raps and sounded like u were reading off ur lyrics..everything else was pretty good bro.


p.s. please feed others?

[Kosovic]

Everyday we get a whole new kind of fruit around here.

[$0 R3@L]

Everyday we get a whole new kind of fruit around here.

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hey i gotta say the lyrics are strong towards the start of the verse,anyone who says anything else is like constipation,full of shit.Some really nice lines.

However it went down hill.The song lost substance and meaning.

And for a suggestion for the future,if your gonna use a commercial beat then change the name because people will compare.The title worked for lil wayne,not you im afraid.

Also spend more production time and effort.Ever heard of adlibs? reverb? etc etc because your vocal presence is like justice,not exsistent.

Also xray/sajjad was harsh but some valid points.I think the fact you dont feed hardly anyone you shouldn't have a problem with whatever is said (feed is feed and all that) so.........

afasd dafgsegfsd dsgfhfdghgnb ghnghntntf gtfhngfnghnghn fuckshitcuntwanktitbollocks!!1!!!

[Kosovic]

You're still the old fruit Aron.

I'd say dont be so helpful to the newcomer....better to destroy all hope from beginning.

[YungNRuthless]

Nice track all around. Better mic is needed.