Zu - IN2U

[mcZu]

Tried something different.

Zu - IN2U

Lyrics:
I can’t really explain it
I’m so into you
When I wake up I just wanna see you
Let’s act like the Na’vi people, bow and say I see you
Wanna protect you, would lie for you in the ICU
I would lie for you, but never lie to you
‘cause Zu is ready to tell that he wanna be with you
Baby, maybe it’s just my mental
But girl, these times, I’ll do whatever to get us through
What I’m saying now is nothing more than a sample
Make you happy, that’s what I’m gonna do
Your eyes spark like what a gun would do
I wanna be down with you
Loving me back, that’s what I want you to do
As long as when I be open, you be too
And let’s push ourselves away from The Edge like U2
Always on my mind, hope I’m on yours too
'cause I’m so into you

[Kosovic]

You bit Pink?

[dR3]

jokes.

[youngfire420]

Not bad man, but maybe put some more emotion into it. You know...

But the lyrics were sick man!

[Mr. FTP]

damn, im feelin' this track. i like your flow on it. and the lryics stayed on point with the subject of the song.
im new here but im not new at giving feedback. good shit man.

[mcZu]

'Wanna protect you, would lie for you (in the ICU)
I would lie for you, but never lie to you'

Apart from 'in the ICU' those are exact lines from poem I wrote.

But nice, I see you're improving from the last time I heard you.

Thanks for listening, appreciate it, guess great minds think alike.

You bit Pink?

I wish.

:laughing: jokes.

Glad you could laugh.

Not bad man, but maybe put some more emotion into it. You know...

But the lyrics were sick man!

Thanks for the feed man, appreciate it.

damn, im feelin' this track. i like your flow on it. and the lryics stayed on point with the subject of the song.
im new here but im not new at giving feedback. good shit man.

Thanks man, appreciate you taking the time to listen.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

delivery could be a bit softer on this type of beat
also pronouncation is still a breaking point...and ur flow was shaky
just some one liners like "And let’s push ourselves away from The Edge like U2" did flow allright

[dR3]

edit: nvm.

[Kosovic]

In any case, i am not feeling it.