Justice - True Blood ( mixtape track )

[Justice]

close this now mods, i need clean this up, thanks.

[Jay-19]

Your voice is is nice for rappin', but you need to mix it better to make it sound as good as it can sound.
Your flow is a little choppy, but you still flow, you just need to step your game up a little bit.
Rhymes are pretty good, nothing special but you get your point across, and that's a good thing.
I like the hook, but as the whole track, it needs better mixing.

Keep up the good work man and take all the feedback you can get and you'll improve in no time, I'm sure of it.

[Kosovic]

And exactly why did you put their names in your mouth? Who exactly are you to do that?

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

i agree your flow slipped several times...you took unexpected breaths (it that makes sense)
hook was kool cant say nuttin bad about it
overlays seems a bit loud and just a lil lil lil bit out of place...
mixing on the verse was okay....i mean sure you can do better but it is what it is

yo where are the pain pills? see what i did there! fo real how's the progress?

[Justice]

thanks alot guys, and yeah i'll play with it some more try get the levels a little better, thanks tho

[Justice]

i agree your flow slipped several times...you took unexpected breaths (it that makes sense)
hook was kool cant say nuttin bad about it
overlays seems a bit loud and just a lil lil lil bit out of place...
mixing on the verse was okay....i mean sure you can do better but it is what it is

yo where are the pain pills? see what i did there! fo real how's the progress?

pain pillz was kept how it was, it got played on an underdround radio station called SDB RADIO, and got some decent reviews nuttin great like but some props, your probs gunna think am full of shit there lol but for real, i'll link you to the site if you want, they have an auto dj and the song is up on there 2, if you ever have anything that needs a verse or summin tho, i'll be happy to check it out, thanks for the feed dude, even tho it gutted me lol it is what it is (Y)

[Justice]

Your voice is is nice for rappin', but you need to mix it better to make it sound as good as it can sound.
Your flow is a little choppy, but you still flow, you just need to step your game up a little bit.
Rhymes are pretty good, nothing special but you get your point across, and that's a good thing.
I like the hook, but as the whole track, it needs better mixing.

Keep up the good work man and take all the feedback you can get and you'll improve in no time, I'm sure of it.

thanks alot man, and yeah am still learning my trade, but if you heard me years ago you would be like 'dam you mad improved' lol i was awful, but thanks man, ama tweek the mixin a little, see if i can get it to blend more, thats another thing am still workin on, thanks for the feed

[Justice]

And exactly why did you put their names in your mouth? Who exactly are you to do that?

dude chill, i got no problem with you hatin on me and shit that doesnt bovver me in the slightest you get that when your a rapper and you say something or some1 people dont like, but this song is about real rap being taken over by dirty south, and i hate dirty south so i mention the ones i think suck, if you wanna hate me for speaking the truth and speaking my mind then thats on you, but am not gunna hide or pretend to like someone, it is what it is!

[Slice]

the beat is cool. flow is on point but could be more enjoyable.
i like the hook and some rhymes are good..
keep it comin

[GibbzyTrShady]

justice dudey how u doin? i got the track u sent me like nice work on that man this tracks pretty tight thinkin i heard it before here you sent it me sware down but yeah its coo' man mixin is a lil off but sal' good bruaaahhhh keep em comin !

[Tash8]

stupid stupid stupid concept for such an underground rapper, especially for such a rapper that's not even that great...

this is was a cool song on the otherhand but the pauses were annoying like c-riz said..love the hook, overall not a bad song...could use better quality and better mixing

[Redd Herring]

Honestly i wouldnt have made a track like this but thats me.... why make a diss that the people your dissing are never gonna hear? thats like going behind someones back and talking shit. BUt other than that it was an alright song... flow coulda used some work but thats an easy fix.

[Justice]

i'm not trying to diss anybody, its not a diss track, its a track where i am expressing my concern over the whole rap game, from the days of the chronic to now, and am pointing out the main ones i dont like, i dont get why am bein hated for that, i no plenty of rappers who mention famous people in there songs even though there never gunna get heard, it fits into what i am talking about, rick ross and t pain imo are wack, so i let it be known that i think that, i see no harm in that what so ever, but i guess it is what it is,


thanks to the guys who gave positive feed, and were able to see the song for being just a song not a diss track or some shit i had no right to do, thanks to you guys, i'll return the favour