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Noble - Yep

Postby youngfire420 » Oct 7th, '10, 11:21

New song by me. Bonus song by my homie J-Money at the bottom. Feedback on both songs is appreciated! Will return feedback!

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This that lava shit
They say they spittin' flame, well you know I spit that hotter shit
And the respect of the vet's is what I gotta get
Takin' lame rapper's back to school, Yep I be on my August shit
Any verse, I slaughter it, you best remember that
I be spittin' so much heat, now they just prayin' for winter back
All these lame rappers, need to learn how to act
You think if you naming yourself Pheonix, that'll put you on the map?
Hell no!, and y'all dont have no cells bro
In your fucking body, that could ever help you sale bro
And the truth is, rapper's actin' like they ruthless
Song's so shitty, like they dont know what a booth is
And you ain't a killin' shit, but neither is your crew bitch
But my music does the talkin', it'll leave you toothless
My verses light shit up, this a candle rap
I'm steady come with the flame, I know yall cant handle that
I'm a beast, do shit you cant teach
Life is such a beach, man fuck it where my sandals at
And yeah I exposed you, to prove you ain't shit
So logged up on your Facebook and took me off your friends list
What a bitch, and you tryna get rich
You a fucking nobody, you shouldn't exist
But shit, thats enough talk 'bout these lame spitters
Its all jokes on these clowns, but I aint never playin' with ya
And a plane will get you, high as fuck
But so will a doobie, so its time to roll up
But my crews headin' for the top, I know you see improvement
But when we look up at these other crews and they still ain't movin'
Hah, yep THP for life
We always in the booth just to make sure that theres more light
In this game, stay shinin' like lamp
All I hear is Rocky music I guess I'm the champ
Yep





J-Money - Where I'm From (Download/Stream)



Didn't get any feedback on my last song. Looking for feedback on this. :y:



Feedback - viewtopic.php?f=38&t=99395
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Re: Noble - Yep

Postby youngfire420 » Oct 8th, '10, 14:48

Bump. :coffee:
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Re: Noble - Yep

Postby Mr. Chambers » Oct 9th, '10, 05:51

Takin' lame rapper's back to school, Yep I be on my August shit
^thats a pretty decent line, can't lie

tbh tho nothing really stood out...flow was very shakey....you need to fix that....delivery was kinda monotone and boring throughout. and lyrics/punchlines were kinda meh.....not the best of songs...beat was cool tho....i think you need to just sit down and think a lil harder cuz some of your shit just sounded like you were rhyming shit together just for a rhyme.
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Re: Noble - Yep

Postby tjb » Oct 9th, '10, 15:13

i didnt really understand this. like the beginning was so quiet and then the vocals got loud soo ehh..
but i subbed u (residentialnoise) and i listened to some other stuff that sounded a lot better. keep it up :y:
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