by Kez » Oct 13th, '10, 02:15
The beat is crazy as usual, did you make it?
The lyrics are pretty good as usual, i was likin the stars/clouds line haha
I still think sometimes your delivery sounds a bit sloppy, i dunno if it's just me
But everything is clear and it captures the song decently enough
It's still an improvement over before, and most of the time it sounds alright
I can see no problems with the flow or anything
Hook was good, i felt enough emotion in it from the vibe of the song
Quality obviously never been any real problem
But yeah i liked the track lol