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Re: On My Own

Postby Tash8 » Oct 13th, '10, 01:31

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Re: On My Own

Postby Kez » Oct 13th, '10, 02:15

The beat is crazy as usual, did you make it?
The lyrics are pretty good as usual, i was likin the stars/clouds line haha
I still think sometimes your delivery sounds a bit sloppy, i dunno if it's just me
But everything is clear and it captures the song decently enough
It's still an improvement over before, and most of the time it sounds alright
I can see no problems with the flow or anything
Hook was good, i felt enough emotion in it from the vibe of the song
Quality obviously never been any real problem

But yeah i liked the track lol
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Re: On My Own

Postby Tash8 » Oct 16th, '10, 18:51

thx man
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