That's a Rap (Produced by Mart85)

[Emadyville]

man i just heard losing it and then this.....

thanks

[AjAMz BoY]

I couldn't message you and I didn't know where else to post this..

But, you might want to check this shit out;
http://www.last.fm/music/D.+Dubs

[Emadyville]

I couldn't message you and I didn't know where else to post this..

But, you might want to check this shit out;
http://www.last.fm/music/D.+Dubs

Yeah that's me, did you think it was someone else with the same name or something

[Emadyville]

Damn this sounded so professional.

Lyrics was awesome, the whole piece flowed perfect from start to finish and the sound was clear as day.

keep on dropping bro. this is a great track, i bumped it 3 times already.

thank you sir, appreciate it

[Emadyville]

Flawless. Fuckin loved it homie!

Thank you Menzo

[AjAMz BoY]

I couldn't message you and I didn't know where else to post this..

But, you might want to check this shit out;
http://www.last.fm/music/D.+Dubs

Yeah that's me, did you think it was someone else with the same name or something

Nope, I just wanted you to know that it exists.. I uploaded some pics and as you can see I'm the top listener.. LOL!

You might wanna add more info, y'know?

[Emadyville]

Yo ^^ haha I just assumed my manager made that but when I talked to him yesterday he said he didn't, so we were mad confused haha so thanks

[AjAMz BoY]

Yo ^^ haha I just assumed my manager made that but when I talked to him yesterday he said he didn't, so we were mad confused haha so thanks

Lol, you're welcome.

[Mr. Chambers]

ok

the beat gotta be honest, i wasn't feeling much...it was too bouncy or something...but you know everyone has different tastes

first verse was kinda average...the flow was all over the place...i didn't really feel much about the delivery...lyrics were ok...

the 2nd verse was by far the best verse...only thing was (and i noticed it with your third verse too) your flow started out so on point...then its like by the 8th line....you break down...the flow becomes more choppy and stop and go ish...should of kept the same flow you used at the beginning of the 2nd and 3rd verse through out the whole song and it woulda been pretty flawless.

3rd verse like i said was dope for the first few bars...but the flow slipped up a lil by the end of the verse

now to me (this might not be to everyone else) but your delivery seemed held back....liek you was afraid to run out of breathe or trying to hard to focus of spitting out your syllables....you coulda put alot more energy into it becuz you almost seemed timid on this tracks which is not something you want on a "bragging" track....

chorus was cool for what it was...wasn't the best chorus i ever heard but by no means the worse


quality was pretty crystal

[Emadyville]

^ thanks for the feed, and a few people mentioned my delivery, I went for a laid back track cause that's how the beat felt, but obviously I could have done better. As for the flow, I'm not sure what you mean by choppy, since I really don't see the flow going off at any point in any verses.

[Mr. Chambers]

it wasn't necessarily "off"...but after the first few bars it just didn't hold up in comparison....i mean if you did the whole song with the flow you used in the 2nd part of your verses it woulda been an average song @ best...if you did your whole song with the flow from the first part it would of been a sick song.....you get what i mean?

[Vettori]

Your definatly on top of your shit. I guess what your missing in my opinion.. is more songs. so i can thouroughly Understand you. Your contents not bad...but its been played out.. Myself included..Rap i suppose is all about "ourselves" But we need to be more concious....I definatly see Some dope songs commin from you..make a few more tracks and ill be convinced. Your multi's are nice, wordplay at times Flawless. The odd things don't stand out clearly enough to me

"on the page in four images" the lines surrounding that..not sure i get it


But Good song. period. coulda been better :P. but thats even with me. haha

[Nick. Y]

nice job on this song homie, decent rhyming and the beat is.. well what can it be except flawless when it's prod by Mart keep it up