EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
EG. wrote:and i dont even like hot dog
Spyder wrote:The silent king of spam.
Killa wrote:Me & dR3 represent the future bitch!!!
Killa wrote:dR3 stay winning...
Artille wrote:This was not bad at all, but not perfect either. I'll feed for each verse individually
Verse 1:
First off, your vocals were a bit too low, which lowers the quality of the verse drastically. What kind of mic do you have? The vocals were clear at times, but seemed distorted at others. The whole verse overall sounded muffled. Your flow was alright, could have been a bit smoother. I liked that it wasn't the constant boring flow, it was a bit faster, but sometimes your transitions from bar to bar were off. Lyrics were good, heard a couple basic ones and a couple that sounded familiar to something Eminem has saidOverall, it wasn't too bad, but could definitely use some work. Raise your vocals next time, not a bad drop though.
Verse 2:
A bit better. Your flow was damn near perfect throughout your verse. Your vocals were also a bit low, but not quite as noticeable as Sentus' (or Coleon's LOL) verse was. Lyrics were ill overall and there was nothing corny or lame that I spotted. Quality was decent as well. Overall, your verse was better on this one.
You guys make decent collabo's. Fire Flame beat is pretty good, just annoying to listen to for a long period of time to give proper feedback haha. Hit me up if you ever need a feature.
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