Artille - The Prince's Son

[Artille]

Hey guys, been a while since I checked back into this site (been having login issues, but I got it fixed). Anyways, I'm back with a new song entitled "The Prince's Son" produced by Zane Beats. I feel this is my best work yet, hopefully you all enjoy it. Check it out, leave some feedback, enjoy. Thanks.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=R6Dmh5sJO7Y

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EDIT: Really don't understand why there isn't a YouTube Embed code on here LOL. I tried for like 10 minutes to figure out the correct code with no luck, fail on me. Someone teach me haha.

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EDIT: Really don't understand why there isn't a YouTube Embed code on here LOL. I tried for like 10 minutes to figure out the correct code with no luck, fail on me. Someone teach me haha.

I completely agree... is fucking hard haha

Hmm.. the mixing sound very wet... sounds like you put a lot of reverb. and those layovers are a bit too high when they come up... consider for your next track to fix those songs.

Its a nice song.. but your flow is too robotic, I dunno if its just me. It sound better on verse 2 tho', still.. hmm.. maybe is the mixing too.

the lyrics tho'.... fucking great.. specially on the hook. but yeah, try to focus on being more smooth on the .. hmm.. I just realized there is no stable hook, there was one part that sounded like a hook lol... I guess be carefull with that too... but yeah, try to be a little less technique heavy and try to be more smooth and enjoyable on the track.

hope this helped mate