Feels Like Forever (w/DerdyPK & Sentus)

[Block]

Concession accepted.

That seems to be some sort of reverse psychology you try to throw into every arguement you're in. Any time I've ever seen you type that, you've never been in any sort of winning position. EVER. It seems you type that as a way to back out of whatever situation is at hand. This certainly doesn't look like conceding:

You hurt my feelings, Block.

Pretty much sums up the jist of what you just said.

Your perception is way off. You interpret me explaining how and why you try to sound like Sadistik as me saying I'm some sort of rap god? No. That's your ego getting hurt. Try again.


And yes, I'm out of your league class. Although I never mentioned that. I never said anything about being better than anyone on here; you did. You brought that up and you're crying about it now--irony.

Sit down and breath. Think of what you're saying--it's making no sense to anyone except you.

In fact, that looks like you have nothing left to say. Did I hurt your ego, Class? Still sad that you'll always be the understudy? Get used to it. I have a feeling Copywrite won't be the only rapper that tries to deny your existence. Tell me how it feels when one of your idols blocks you because you fucking stalk him. I'm genuinely curious.

And hey, in four years when I'm the same age you are and I've actually made a name for myself I might still lend you a collab for a discount.

Have you ever been on stage? Have you ever had someone who you don't know--outside of the internet--tell you how dope you are? Have you EVER spit anything in front of a crowd of people who aren't your friends? Shit, even if they are.. Has anyone ever heard you live? Have you ever been offered a contract for your music? No? Don't plan on going anywhere with this career of yours any time soon (I use the word 'career' very, very lightly. I cannot put enough emphasis on the word 'lightly').

Even if you try to lie to the people here, Class, you know the truth. You know that the answer to every single one of those questions is a solid "No."

Don't kid yourself with delusions of grandeur. You're a below average youtube rapper who would piss himself if he ever got on stage with the lights on and 100+ faces staring at him. And the difference? I've done all that. Multiple times...

Let's see how well you can feed yourself off those 100 youtube subscribers that you were so diligently bragging about.

I'm not bragging, merely putting you in your place where you belong--learn it.

[classthe_king]

In fact, that looks like you have nothing left to say. Did I hurt your ego, Class? Still sad that you'll always be the understudy? Get used to it. I have a feeling Copywrite won't be the only rapper that tries to deny your existence. Tell me how it feels when one of your idols blocks you because you fucking stalk him. I'm genuinely curious.

If talking to a rapper once and asking about collabs means I'm stalking them then hell, I'm stalking about 25+ rappers

Have you ever been on stage?

Not yet

Have you ever had someone who you don't know--outside of the internet--tell you how dope you are?

Yes

Have you EVER spit anything in front of a crowd of people who aren't your friends?

I've spit at parties when I knew some of them and haven't known others

Shit, even if they are.. Has anyone ever heard you live?

Well obviously

Have you ever been offered a contract for your music? No? Don't plan on going anywhere with this career of yours any time soon (I use the word 'career' very, very lightly. I cannot put enough emphasis on the word 'lightly').

See, here your illiteracy is hurting you. Do you know what "in four years means?" Obviously I haven't been offered a record deal, I've uploaded 20 tracks to youtube and have never tried to send my stuff to a record. Yes I have no career at the moment, I'm was a Junior in highschool more worried about other things than rap. You're like 21, if I'm 21 and still have to brag about how good I am on internet forums like you I want someone to just shoot me.

Even if you try to lie to the people here, Class, you know the truth. You know that the answer to every single one of those questions is a solid "No."

Don't kid yourself with delusions of grandeur. You're a below average youtube rapper who would piss himself if he ever got on stage with the lights on and 100+ faces staring at him. And the difference? I've done all that. Multiple times...

Let's see how well you can feed yourself off those 100 youtube subscribers that you were so diligently bragging about.

I'm not bragging, merely putting you in your place where you belong--learn it.

And nor am I, I'm just trying to let you know you're not the second coming of Nas. You don't have perfect mixing, perfect flow, perfect mic presence, perfect delivery, perfect lyrics, perfect rhymes. You don't have perfect anything and to be honest your music sounds like shit. I mean hell, I don't think I've ever put out a song as bad as that song that you recorded "Over a year ago." So how about this, you stop running around the forum acting like you just got signed by Eminem and start shutting the fuck up. This is the last time I'm responding to you.

P.S This track was inspired by Grieves, not Sadistik. You were the first person in the world to ever hear these rappers so shouldn't you know them more than anyone?

[DƎRDYPK]

bump


shit just got railllllll

free sticcy z & anonymous

[Block]

Not yet

exactly. Where's this career of yours? Will you ever be on stage? Maybe with my help (again, like the rest of this shit you call a 'career') Read further.

Yes

I said don't lie.

I've spit at parties when I knew some of them and haven't known others

You think dropping something at a party where every third person thinks they're a rapper constitutes as moving ahead or spitting for an audience?

Well obviously

again, read my last reply. You already said you haven't been on stage. Period.

See, here your illiteracy is hurting you. Do you know what "in four years means?" Obviously I haven't been offered a record deal, I've uploaded 20 tracks to youtube and have never tried to send my stuff to a record. Yes I have no career at the moment, I'm was a Junior in highschool more worried about other things than rap. You're like 21, if I'm 21 and still have to brag about how good I am on internet forums like you I want someone to just shoot me.

What does four years matter, Class? I only started taking rap seriously in the spring of 2010 when I moved to VA. Since then, I've done and been offered everything I posted... Yet you're here bragging about 100 youtube subscribers. Age doesn't matter. See the difference?

And bragging about how good I am? Lol. Please, kid.

And nor am I, I'm just trying to let you know you're not the second coming of Nas. You don't have perfect mixing, perfect flow, perfect mic presence, perfect delivery, perfect lyrics, perfect rhymes. You don't have perfect anything and to be honest your music sounds like shit.

Do I have to quote YOU on my diss to Scrubz where you said something along the lines of: " Your flow is flawless." Doesn't flawless mean 'without flaw'? In other words, perfect? I believe it does. Hypocrite much? Don't be bitter, Class. There is nothing about my technical rap game, in any of my two recent drops that you can critique. What are you going to critique, the mixing? Even that is better than yours, and I used a shitty USB mic for both of them

I mean hell, I don't think I've ever put out a song as bad as that song that you recorded "Over a year ago."

So you're trying to critique a song from nearly 3 years ago now? I'll reiterate the fact I started taking rap seriously in Spring of 2010. That's around the same time you did, right? Why am I the one teaching you?

If you can critique anything technical about my "coming home" verse, I'll concede immediately. And I mean critique--not an opinion like, "LOL U VOICE IS GAY". Because you can't. No one is perfect, Class.. Some of us--you--are just further away from perfection than others (me).

So how about this, you stop running around the forum acting like you just got signed by Eminem and start shutting the fuck up. This is the last time I'm responding to you.

Uh oh. Class is a tough guy now. "start shutting the fuck up" You display your anger so flamboyantly that it's comical. I can picture you all pale faced, blood all pumping in your veins, seething at the screen because somebody dare question your music.. You're pathetic. When you've done half of what I've done--which isn't a whole lot in the grand scheme of things--in the short amount of time that I've done it, we'll talk. You bring this shit upon yourself, then you get pissy at the backlash. Hike up your skirt, you fucking femme. You're a child. Somebody dare step on that petty little ego that you've built yourself and you try to tear them down the best you know how--which is more like a light slap against a boulder than anything.

I created the style that you started using. I created YOU. I coached you and explained how and what you were doing wrong. Ask anyone that used to frequent the Creative Writing section. You were shit until I came along, Class. You were attempting punchlines and you were terrible at it. When I came along with my style of writing, you tried copying it--which is what you do, and call it talent--and all of a sudden you started getting better; why? Because I was coaching you behind the scenes and you were studying my writtens. Try to deny it--denying it will only make you more of a bitch than you already are.
Nas? Nas is fucking terribly monotone. Kinda like you.. Monotone; forced emotion. Can't hit the snare with the correct amount of syllables in a line. Can't work a correct punch in to save your life. See what I'm getting at?

P.S This track was inspired by Grieves, not Sadistik. You were the first person in the world to ever hear these rappers so shouldn't you know them more than anyone?

Your inspiration has nothing to do with how you sound. You didn't pull the Grieves thing off very well at all.. You still sounded like you were getting stabbed in the stomach to force that screaming out of you that you try to call rap. You still failed at flowing to the melody. What more do you want?


You live in Ohio, right? I'll be in Kentucky in 2 weeks... I'll be no more than 2-3 hours from you. Would you like me to book a show near you, and you can open up for us and see just how good you actually are? (real offer. Let's see how well this talking shit works for you). Here's your chance, Class.. Reach for the stars.

See, I don't just talk shit behind a computer screen, Class--I live this shit. I'm not an internet rapper. I don't brag about youtube views and think that's the pinnacle of my career. I don't get blocked by known rappers for stalking them. When you get this shit through your head, you may get somewhere... You're doing it all wrong.

[SajN]

It's locked but I will post anyway:


As I said on PK's facebook, I liked it.

It's first time I am listening to Solace, and I was positively surprised. The voice was different than I thought, but it sounded nice
All three had good verses, and I am not sure which I enjoyed the most though. I don't think this song is great, or even flawless, but the way it is it sounds good

[B.A.D.]

SAJN, I PM'd Solace to open a new thread so people can stick to feedback in that.

but I locked this one to avoid this bullshit to carry on in this Section.

[SajN]

Yeah, well done

I know I shouldn't have posted after it's been locked, but I was going to feed it yesterday, and then I fell asleep. So I did it now even though this bullshit happened in the thread.