Nefarious- All I've Known

[Nefarious]

I turned this beat on and started singing and came up with the starting of the chorus, then just killed half the song, then finished it the next day, and the day after i recorded it, im pretty happy with how this turned out, gotta be one of my favourite songs ive made ever.

http://hulkshare.com/clml11lgwjvo

Lyrics

Verse 1

I'll be honest, this is, what i am.
You cant, not give a fuck, i can.
Noone's gonna interrupt my plan.
Better know what's comming.
Take a short cut, running.
With a force, no remourse.
And i wont stop, nothing.
Ever, held me down, when i, fell deep.
Want to, overwhelmn me now, and a yell, keeps.
Telling me to quit, if, thats, it.
I dont wanna live, in, this, existance.
All i miss, is when, i got to, feel like bliss.
I reminise, and think of all ive ever wanted.
And i never, get to be, as happy.
As i thought, i shouldve been.
Do i have, the courage, within.
To win, when im, worrying.

Chorus

Dont call me names, dont say im strange.
Cuz the way, i think of things.
Might change, from the way, that it used to be.
And you gave me, a place to call my home.
Cuz when ive wasted all ive known.
Is to be patient, ive awakened, will i make it, on my own.

Verse 2

I want to go see, everything, i've gotta know.
Hot or cold, ive been looking for the, pot of gold.
I dont wanna sound like you, this is me.
And im walking around in a mystery.
I wonder why am i now so pissed to see.
What history, is realistically, i never miss the beat.
Because you know im on a mission.
With a situation critical to risk defeat.
I wont slip when im weak, never drop unless.
Im getting up to the tip, peak, top of this.
And im ready for a whole new episode.
Who told you, that you get to go.
I wont wait no more i'll let you know.
I may make mistakes but im special.
Im not perfect but im close to it.
I want to find out what the emotion is.

Bridge

Im all alone in my mind.
Im moving slower than time.
I dont know what i want to find.
I have noone to blame.
So will you show me sign.
Or will you throw me a line.
Or am i only hoping.
I'll get to be normal again.

Verse 3

There's nothing left to believe.
With all the stress and despression.
It gets the best of me, easily.
Its infecting my brain.
And its effecting my memory.
As upset as i'll ever be.
You'll remember that every.
Day is never the same.
I want a meaning to exist.
All im fiending for is this.
Ive been dreaming of a feeling.
That was better than shame.
So if you wanted me to die.
Well ive gotta be alive.
Even tho im always going.
Through incredible pain.

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[Solace]

This is really interesting, as I've never heard you sing full verses. I've always enjoyed the sort of alternative hip hop cross over kind of thing. Your voice isn't that set for singing yet though, if you could hit higher notes with confidence and strength, this would have been wonderful. Not insulting it, but it seems you develop a monotone and nasal delivery as you sing to keep your pitch and voice properly. Same as your 2nd verse for 'Better Than Yesterday'. Your vocals seem a tad drowned out by the beat, I feel they should be at least 2b louder. This is actually a pretty enjoyable song regardless. Nicely written. Sup with the fuck up at around 2:04 on the right stereo? Sort of chops up there. But yeah, I enjoyed it.

[Nefarious]

Mine actually would completely stop playing at 2:04 and i was pissed when i got home right after recording but i managed to fix it and get it to stop turning off lol other than that i think its just something random by accident that made it do that, and i know what ur saying about my singing, i dont think i'll ever not be able to sing like that, im not a singer and some notes i just cant hit, i can hit them in my mind tho, and when i whisper, so when im writing thats how i usually follow along my lyrics and when i rehearse it after its completely different and i struggle my way through it the best i can, ive never really cared about my singing not being the best ever since i heard eminem say.

Yo, I can't sing it
I feel like singin'
I wanna fuckin' sing
Cuz I'm happy
Yeah, I'm happy
Ha Ha
I got my baby back
Yo, check it out

Lol thats a great intro, and even tho i knew i cant always hit every note i just do it anyways
cuz it makes me happy and fuck it i wanna sing im happy and i feel like singing LOL

[Solace]

Ohh I see. I'm all for singing even if you don't have a beautiful voice, as long as you make it work

im not a singer and some notes i just cant hit, i can hit them in my mind tho, and when i whisper, so when im writing thats how i usually follow along my lyrics and when i rehearse it after its completely different and i struggle my way through it the best i ca

Pretty much same here lol.

[Nefarious]

tyvm solace.