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She Gets Me High

Postby RainMan44 » Sep 20th, '12, 02:53

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All I want feedback on is the last verse, which is me. :happy: Please. Then hit me up with a link to your shit and I will return the favor.

I'm not fond of the song as a whole. The chorus, I wanted to change but it was not my song so I couldn't do shit about it. Just peep the last verse though. Starts at like 2:50. Thanks. :flower:

http://soundcloud.com/austinbrown415/a- ... me-high-ft
"This dude doing this interview wants me to spin a few,
Lyrics while I tie my tennis shoes in the nude
A romantic interlude in a livin’ room,
In an inner tube with a dude with a bit of lube
Fuck that I’m sniffin’ glue, sippin' gin & juice,
And a little bit of paint thinner with my dinner too,
You better pay me for my bars like your rent is due,
Now hurry up and finish dude before I finish you."




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Re: She Gets Me High

Postby Vettori » Sep 20th, '12, 03:01

Quality seemed ok, adlibs were too loud. I like Your writing & You have a good voice for this. Not much to say, Seemed good for the song it was. If I get time I'll check out some of your other material.
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Re: She Gets Me High

Postby Blu » Sep 20th, '12, 03:16

The production is smooth, I like it. Who mixed this? Sounds like whoever did just pasted the vocals onto the beat and called it final.

Fix that mixing problem and re-upload that track...wanna see how it'll sound with much more cleaner mixing. You have a nice chill-out type voice, you'll be gettin' all da beetchez. :y:
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