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Postby DelinQuent » Jan 9th, '07, 04:10

i've been rapping for a couple of years now, the best songs are at the top. Oldest songs are at the bottom.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 9th, '07, 04:15

listening to "why"

its good the mixing and effect could be better or left out.... at the start of he chorus you soun like eminem a little bit.....the lyrics are good and so is the concept


how long you been rapping exactly ?

and what other tracks should i check ?
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Postby DelinQuent » Jan 9th, '07, 04:19

i've been writing forrrr i think about 4 years, recording for about 3 years. I rap with my bestfriend, so a lot of the stuff is the two of us. we battled some kid from school that's what "Call Me Da Govenor" is. "You Gon Die Tonight" is pretty decent.
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Postby Inches » Jan 9th, '07, 04:19

call me da governor i liked


not the rest i heard
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 9th, '07, 04:20

DelinQuent wrote:i've been writing forrrr i think about 4 years, recording for about 3 years. I rap with my bestfriend, so a lot of the stuff is the two of us. we battled some kid from school that's what "Call Me Da Govenor" is. "You Gon Die Tonight" is pretty decent.
Thanks for the response.


kool imma check them out :8)

whats your set up ? the quality is great :8)
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Postby DelinQuent » Jan 9th, '07, 04:24

well the older stuff was just a regular computer mic, but just recently we made the move to a studio mic. goes into the box with firewire to the computer, then it gets edited in cool edit.
thanks for the feedback, all is appreciated wether negative or positive.
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 9th, '07, 04:28

DelinQuent wrote:well the older stuff was just a regular computer mic, but just recently we made the move to a studio mic. goes into the box with firewire to the computer, then it gets edited in cool edit.
thanks for the feedback, all is appreciated wether negative or positive.


listened to the govner song , that songs great, i like the mixing on it :worship: imma check out the rest tomorrow

id give you a link to check out my stuff but its all really old and my latest stuff has just been off , went for a bit just upping lyrical game so when i tried to flow more and more rythms it just didnt work..im getting it sorted out but workin on a track now lol

nice to see a new face with talent around :worship:
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Postby DelinQuent » Jan 9th, '07, 04:32

thanks, yeah just let me know then. i'd be glad to listen and return the favor.
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Postby C-Game » Jan 9th, '07, 12:11

Send me ur best on WMA version and ill give u some feed as welll

i hv slow net
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Postby B.A.D. » Jan 9th, '07, 22:51

why is nice...
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Postby MoBrat » Jan 9th, '07, 23:02

Bar wrote:listened to the govner song , that songs great, i like the mixing on it :worship:


oops i forgot 2 comment ^^^good song good flow i even downloaded it and i think i put it on my MP3 if i didnt it'll be on there soon Good Track :thumbsup:
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Postby DelinQuent » Jan 10th, '07, 01:01

Call Me Da Governor in WMA format-http://www.sendspace.com/file/7wqfhx
Why in WMA format-http://www.sendspace.com/file/g9hp6l
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Postby $0 R3@L » Jan 10th, '07, 01:17

DelinQuent wrote:Call Me Da Governor in WMA format-http://www.sendspace.com/file/7wqfhx
Why in WMA format-http://www.sendspace.com/file/g9hp6l
thanks for all the responses.


yer man the governor track was some class production not to mention the rap itself was hot shit.Great work and hoep to see you around here more and more track exclusives :) .
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Postby Vettori » Jan 13th, '07, 06:30

Would sound better if you stayed on beat...The beggining i didnt like i think thats the chorus...Thats to the song why... Hmmm not bad u just need alot of improvement
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