new Beat..

[omer45]

Hi !

Its my first Beat

I put 3 files:

1.The song
2.Acapella
3.Instrumental

Download: http://rapidshare.com/files/12676096/Omer45.rar.html

please tell me what you think on it!

[DelinQuent]

i didn't really like the beat. it didn't have the traditional snare and i don't recall a hi hat. the low bass sounded verrrrry jumbled. keep working, you can only improve.

[omer45]

i didn't really like the beat. it didn't have the traditional snare and i don't recall a hi hat. the low bass sounded verrrrry jumbled. keep working, you can only improve.

thanks i will keep working

[DC4952]

Im assuming youre using FL STudio with the samples u used. to fix you bass problem, if im right its not in the piano roll wich makes the notes keep playing. right click the bass channel adn click send to piano roll. this should make the bass sound better. Also add some drums to it too. the Vintage kit is good for hip hop btw.

hope i helped

[omer45]

thanks for this