Do You Still

by **Call Me Pik** » Feb 18th, '07, 16:01

R&B track me on the hook Delinquent 1st verse me second Delinquent third

track has some problems with volume that i kinda wanna fix so dont hate

im not a singer by tha way ...shud i keep my verse or use the rap i was going to use

gimme some feedback

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=162397&songID=1529988

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Feb 18th, '07, 16:09

typing while listening

i like this beat man

first verse is nice retty short but still good :happy:

this is a different apporach, the hook is great for this type of track, props on that, the second verse is good i like the mixing on this sounds sick :worship:

third verse is good aswell, nice mixing nice deep lyrics :worship:

if you mean should yu keep this style for a demo ect, ou should defiantly show it, coz it shows a completely differnt style yo can do perfectly

goodwork on this man :worship:

check out my single, just under this thread

by **DelinQuent** » Feb 18th, '07, 16:17

wordddd, good lookin on the feedback. that's what i tried to tell him, shows you can do a bunch of different things, and you're not a one trick pony.

by **Sleepy** » Feb 18th, '07, 18:23

DelinQuent wrote:wordddd, good lookin on the feedback. that's what i tried to tell him, shows you can do a bunch of different things, and you're not a one trick pony.

true

by **yoshi** » Feb 18th, '07, 20:57

wow, nice one :8)

good lyrics and it just sounds cool.. i like the hook too btw. so yeah.. keep em coming :flower:

by **Call Me Pik** » Feb 19th, '07, 02:53

thnks fah tha feedback we might be playin this song at prom if they let us so it has to be perfect get at me

by **Inches** » Feb 19th, '07, 03:51

the beat is dope
can u send that to me?

k feeed.
first verse is short..... wasnt feeling it that much.
chorus is pretty good
second verse when its higher pitch its dope
third verse is good too

overall.
all was good except for the first verse and your flow was a lil off in last verse

good track tho, hopefully they play it at your prom

by **$0 R3@L** » Feb 20th, '07, 18:51

erm not my type of track or music....but it was well done for what it was.

by **Call Me Pik** » Feb 21st, '07, 01:11

aight thnks fah tha opinion uppin

by **Kez** » Feb 21st, '07, 01:47

$0 R3@L wrote:erm not my type of track or music....but it was well done for what it was.

by **B.A.D.** » Feb 21st, '07, 01:54

good singin...

that's good

Do You Still

Do You Still

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