quick little freestyle i did (managed to type the lyrics)

[stevethetruth]

i did this on my phone so don't be expecting perfect quality lol

http://www.zshare.net/audio/freestyle-1-mp3-xg7.html


any feedback is awesome

here's the lyrics i managed to type em up lol

yo, my name is the truth
i'm bout to kill you in this booth
you won't even say who you are
well guess what
i'm about to kill you live
you motherfuckers gonna die
what did i tell you don't even commit sucide
cause that's what you do when you go against me
i'm bout to kill you so swiftly
bitch you missed me
you must be insane
in the membrane
you must be doing shit crazy
like destorying some babies
your a baby your a loser
you can't even win right
you don't even know what it's like to spit right
your shit is weak
you can't even admit defeat
i'm bout to crumble you up
rumble you cheap (< not sure what i said lol)
hah

[stevethetruth]

thanks for the feedback sarah

yeah it was my best freestyle i've ever done in my opinon lol



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[ThomasAguanis]

I heard it exclusively n it was pretty good so nice work Steve

^word
I agree with Sarah. good job steve

[mart85]

yeah it seemed good... altho it was kinda hard to hear every word lol... but for a freestyle it sounded good

[randomghost]

yeah i liked it too nice freestyle

[stevethetruth]

thanks for the feedback guys

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

was good for a freestyle man, but next time have a beat

[stevethetruth]

thanks and yeah lol

oh btw i managed to type up the lyrics lol

-check the first post-

[Phantom]

its aight steve

its not booboo but its aight

[stevethetruth]

lol thanks for the feedback


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[stevethetruth]

bumping so leave some feed please

[Kez]

Already told you what i think, it's good but the quality really fucks it up in my opinion