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Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 29th, '07, 06:17

bizzurke 1.wma - 1.49MB

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Postby DJ.Parker » Mar 29th, '07, 07:45

voice isnt clear. But kinda cool. :happy:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Mar 29th, '07, 11:35

ok before i give feed listen

rain, your a gret rap battler and have complez lyrics, but audio is a different type of writing so dont take what i say offensive



ok, firtly mixing wise your voice needs turned up, secondly your just talking over the beat, you need to flow tih the beat man, try dumb down your lyrics a bit to learn to flow better, once you learn to flow add in your multi's and beileive me man if you at one point learn to flow your complex lyrics youll be sick
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Postby MoBrat » Mar 29th, '07, 14:32

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:ok before i give feed listen

rain, your a gret rap battler and have complez lyrics, but audio is a different type of writing so dont take what i say offensive



ok, firtly mixing wise your voice needs turned up, secondly your just talking over the beat, you need to flow tih the beat man, try dumb down your lyrics a bit to learn to flow better, once you learn to flow add in your multi's and beileive me man if you at one point learn to flow your complex lyrics youll be sick


like bar said u have to turn up ur vocals and ur flow is something u gotta work on but lyrics are good keep at it man i can see u being a sick artist but u gotta work on the flow :smoking:
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Postby $0 R3@L » Mar 29th, '07, 15:19

stick to text man...on a beat u have no flow.
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