new beat - need feedback!

[soperman005]

advanced.mp3 - 9.08MB

if u listened then lead feedback plz!

[mart85]

didn't have time to listen to it all, but it's not bad, it has potential... but the main melody could be more on time with the beat, and the last few notes of the melody don't really sound good... the drums are well made tho good job

if you could fix the main melody, and turn it down a little bit, it would be a lot better, try this

[MoBrat]

hmm different then i've heard from most ppl...i dont know what im hearing but i dont like that weird nosie at some parts of the beat it sounds ok hmm now that i've listened to the beat it's not bad man i could see someone making a decent track with this beat... now this is stuck in my head

[DC4952]

not bad, drums were nice but like mart said the main melody needs be on beat with the drums

[Hadez]

its um... different. like everyone b4 me said, the drums are good. the sound you chose for the main melody could be different though.