This Is My Shot - Mixed by Mart

[die2nite]

http://www.zshare.net/audio/this-is-my-shot-mp3.html

Mad props to Mart for the mixing, I'm loving it.

[mart85]

thanks man... altho honestly, I didn't do a lot to it lol

nice song man, the chorus is cool... and you did well on the verses too, cause the beat didn't seem like the easiest to flow to, with all the instruments in there...

keep it up

[C-Game]

PM's link to XT for download

[die2nite]

Thanks Mart.

And who's XT?

[Hoopz]

It wasnt bad, im very critical so get ready:


Ok, first, i give your propz for rapping on that ridiculous beat. Second, your flow was pretty decent, just about everything made scense, structure was pretty good, your dictics are on the weak side, but that can be worked on with the proper training. your pronunciation of most words was good, but your rhyme handeling slipped in a few lines, your overall performance was ok, on a scale of 1 to 10, id give you a 7.5.

ways to improve your dictics:

alright, if you want to improve your dictics all you really need is a dictionary and alot of patience.

Try to sing lines like - the patient that payed me go sprayed by his lad

Trust me, your dictics will be good in no time.

(for the record, dictics is a slang word in my country for proper word pronunciation)

rediculous beat? I love it

[die2nite]

It wasnt bad, im very critical so get ready:


Ok, first, i give your propz for rapping on that ridiculous beat. Second, your flow was pretty decent, just about everything made scense, structure was pretty good, your dictics are on the weak side, but that can be worked on with the proper training. your pronunciation of most words was good, but your rhyme handeling slipped in a few lines, your overall performance was ok, on a scale of 1 to 10, id give you a 7.5.

ways to improve your dictics:

alright, if you want to improve your dictics all you really need is a dictionary and alot of patience.

Try to sing lines like - the patient that payed me go sprayed by his lad

Trust me, your dictics will be good in no time.

(for the record, dictics is a slang word in my country for proper word pronunciation)

Thanks man I'm going to work on my pronunciation.

[die2nite]

Bump.

[C-Game]

i downloaded da song

i liked da beat .......

ill give a full review 2mo.

its at XTs place