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I made Another Beat....[updated Aprill 11th]

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I made Another Beat....[updated Aprill 11th]

Postby IceAxe » Apr 10th, '07, 04:07

Original Beat


Update: The New Version with altered Kick/snare pattern



Feedback Greatly Appreciated
Last edited by IceAxe on Apr 11th, '07, 19:32, edited 1 time in total.
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 10th, '07, 04:11

my favorite part is in the middle,

man for your second or whatever time this is amazing :D

keep it up, i'd love to hear more
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Postby Hadez » Apr 10th, '07, 04:26

its an interesting sound :sweating: , its good though, keep it up :smoking:
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 11th, '07, 01:47

Please MODS!!!! beat section hahahah


Nice beat by the way
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Postby Phantom » Apr 11th, '07, 02:27

its ok man

not rappable thought, i think you should aim for that but you probably already knew that

6.5/10

keep working cuz if u make that your 2nd try then you could do something big down the line
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Postby Global » Apr 11th, '07, 02:33

its alright for 10-15 ..

should of put more time in it :smoking:

6/10 ;)

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Postby Ethos » Apr 11th, '07, 02:47

Yeah waht everyone else says. you should put more work in it. Im not wearing headphones right now so I cant tell if the kicks flow. but I know that them snares dont. try reworking them a bit. :happy:
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Postby IceAxe » Apr 11th, '07, 03:07

thanks for the feed so far.

Yeah I know it's not rappable as it is. As soon as I finished it I posted it to see some opinions. I'm gonna re-work it when I get some time. Gonna completely scrap the kick/snare pattern...and may re-do the strings, but if y'all think they're allright as it is, tell me.
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Postby IceAxe » Apr 11th, '07, 19:34

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Postby DJ.Parker » Apr 12th, '07, 07:01

well great job since its ur 2nd time :flower: whats da software u used? and ya its not suitable for rap I guess but fair enough 4 an intro or 4 a chorous :sweating:
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Postby Call Me Pik » Apr 12th, '07, 22:54

not rappable but sounds pretty hott nice job
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