HoldStrong Chorus

[AspirinE]

I knw it's not worth listening, but i show it to aask if its an improvement...

not really, ur trying to get ahead of urself, that way u wont improve, take it step by step.

And heres a simple patter i made as an example for ya, so u could see wat the basic structure is.

http://www.zshare.net/download/example-flp-3ek.html

[Tash8]

thanks that'll help

for some reason I dont hear the HipHop Snare sound

[Tash8]

here is the completey new finished beat:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/holdstrongbg-mp3.html

I wasn't gonna finsih it cuz of what aspirine said, but i was like 90% done with it so i just finsihed it

[$0 R3@L]

here is the completey new finished beat:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/holdstrongbg-mp3.html

I wasn't gonna finsih it cuz of what aspirine said, but i was like 90% done with it so i just finsihed it

thats like the church organ player on coke.

The beats allll over the place and the 'tune' you've made is damn awful.

To be straight honest with you id use free beats to sort out your ACTUAL rapping then worry about making beats.Or just figure which one you'd rather do first.

Cause tryna suss out both at the same time is obviously not working for you bro.

[Tash8]

^^ I know but I never find good beats that fit what I want... and I'm done I know what i'm tyring to do is now is just work on making the drums like asiprine told me.. I'll try to make lyrics for the beat I find instead of other way around.