New Beat (Snippet)

[Tash8]

Hey

so I couldn't work on my song for a while, so i decided to make a beat that took me about 10 min...

it's only 30 sec, i think it's an improvement from my previous ones, but still needs work.

ennnn.mp3 - 0.55MB

Thanks

[Xray]

its alrite beat just needs more work to it like you said

[Hadez]

the drums are simple, but still better than you're last attempts at the drums. the melody seems more like an intro rather than part of verses.

[Tash8]

it kinda is an intro, it's like an intro plus a chorus, i'm sttll working on it, and it won't have that string anymore thru out verses, i'm trying to think of something to add instead of the strings