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*NEW* Big Ax-D "Gild The Lily"

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*NEW* Big Ax-D "Gild The Lily"

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 14th, '07, 04:51

Just a track... not from any album lol
produced by mister ka

tell me what cha'll think bout this....

http://www.zshare.net/audio/big-ax-d-gild-the-lily-mp3.html

^^^^^
chea!! :smoking:
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 14th, '07, 04:56

flow and lyrics are good man, chorus aint to great i aint feeling it at all

you still need to get some decent equipment for recording man, its holding you back
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Postby Tash8 » Apr 14th, '07, 05:10

^ What bar said

You had good flow but sometimes your slurred but that's easily fixable. Your lyrics sounded good for the most part. Your chorus was aite at best.

I like your flow with the beat A LOT

keep it up
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 14th, '07, 05:15

@ bar: hahaha... thanx for the feed bro.... as people can see hook (chorus) wan't meant to be good haha.... I'm tryin to get a new mic, already got myself a mixer... expect sum good shit soon.. haha thnx again bro

@ tash: thanx playa.... I'm keepin it up





bump :shifty: hehe
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Postby randomghost » Apr 14th, '07, 14:57

this shit is hot man, flow is in point, beat is ok, good work :smoking:
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 14th, '07, 19:44

thnx 4 the feed
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Postby mart85 » Apr 15th, '07, 03:33

nice track... I liked the beat, and you flowed well to it... like others said, you're quality isn't the best, and sometimes I think your layvovers were not perfectly delivered to fit your "normal" vocal track, but that's not too hard to improve... I hope you get a better mic soon, it'd be cool to hear you with better quality :8)

nice job keep it up
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Postby B.A.D. » Apr 15th, '07, 05:47

thanx mart!

I'm tryin to get my quality big... but still gots sum problems
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