New track from my group!

[Jay-19]

http://download.yousendit.com/45A5C7DC6E77AA15

This track is called While The World Flies By and it's the first english song we've done. So far it's just been me who's been doing some english rap.

I tried a little different type of rap on this one, and I wanted to see what you think of it.
It's me and a friend on the chorus, me on the 1st verse and 2nd verse, and my brother on the 3rd verse.

And if you think my brother is bad, it's because it's his first english rap.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

zshare please ?

[Tash8]

here's the zshare:
vilostad - while the world flies by.mp3 - 3.37MB


I'll feed while listening in a sec..

[Jay-19]

http://download.yousendit.com/45A5C7DC6E77AA15

There you go...

Give feedback!

[Tash8]

I didn't like the chorus, it just didn't fit.

the first verse was pretty good

the second verse rhymes weren't that great, but it was still pretty cool.

the third verse was pretty good but that accent is ehhh

the beat was OK, it seemed really simple

[Tash8]

http://download.yousendit.com/45A5C7DC6E77AA15

There you go...

Give feedback!

that's not a zshare link, i posted it above you.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

first verse is good nice agressive flow good rythming

chorus didnt really fit, probly just the mixing

secone verse, again agressive its pretty simple but it flows

third verse was ok, nice flor n lyrics


overall good track, beat is strange but

[Jay-19]

Aight guys, thanks for the feedback. We thought we should do something different and mixed alot of styles in one track. I'm glad you think the track is decent, since it was just an experiment.

[Tash8]

well it was pretty good since you guys didn't do much english rap and your brother did good for his first English rap.

[D@vid]

ill give u propz just cuz the delivery was good (most ppl cant even do that good). ur voice was weird as hell, sounded like u were possessed by the devil. and i agree with what bar said

[Jay-19]

ill give u propz just cuz the delivery was good (most ppl cant even do that good). ur voice was weird as hell, sounded like u were possessed by the devil. and i agree with what bar said

Thanks man.. I actually thought my voice sounded pretty cool in some strange way...

And thanks to Tash8 also!

[Inches]

The first verse was like an angry verse. A white young buck. Allright though.
Chorus was monotone. Enimee?
Second verse was ummm. like the first. Cept this guy sounds like he smokes more cigs.
Third verse is better though, i like it best.

Good job fir first english one

[Jay-19]

The first verse was like an angry verse. A white young buck. Allright though.
Chorus was monotone. Enimee?
Second verse was ummm. like the first. Cept this guy sounds like he smokes more cigs.
Third verse is better though, i like it best.

Good job fir first english one

Well, it's me in both the first one and the second one.